"Oh, Little sissy (made) I have a mess for you !" Should be: " Oh, Little sissy (maid) I have a mess for you !"
I lost track of time as I put my cum dump into various positions and released more seed into her. I didn't find myself back in control until I looked over her, leaking a large amount of semen dripping from her pussy. Becky's hair was a mess, and she was on her back. Her legs were spread out in a mess on the bed.
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Punctuation marks in wrong spots. My mother turned her breasts ( , ) now visible to me. Should be: My mother turned ( , ) her breasts now visible to me.
I smirked, and I stepped into the pool and enjoyed myself. The rocks were smooth, and they massaged my feet as I walked over them. I was starting to get hungry, though, after some time. I was getting restless, and I stood up and left towards the elevator to head back up to the pool. I didn't see Grace on my way up, and I waited and exited at the top.
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(Sperateis) obviously a misspell . pretty sure it was supposed to be (separate)
"Would you like Sperate rooms or to be in a group room for your massage?" Grace asked.
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... I guessed in the back of my head B cup breasts looked really good. You should have added (that) or (which) in between the words breast and looked. ... I guessed in the back of my head B cup breasts (that/which) looked really good .
I looked at her in that dress and saw that she had, I guessed in the back of my head B cup breasts looked really good. She seemed fit too, and I saw some muscle there. My cock slightly twitched in reaction, and I made myself turn away. "Thank you; we will let you know if we need anything. Actually, Could I get a bottle of water? I could really use some since I haven't had any in a bit. If you could get maybe two for me?" I asked.
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it isn't absolutely necessary , but you could have emphasized (girl next door) with quotation marks. Such as: I looked much cuter and almost "Girl Next Door" with it on.
I sighed, moved towards the dresser, and pulled out something I didn't really like wearing but knew would keep my mother happy. I put on a yellow sundress that I thought made me look awful. Still, my mother loved this dress, and I looked in the mirror. I looked much cuter and almost girl next door with it on. I fucking hated the look, but this entire evening was me bribing my mother, and I wasn't hiding it. If I didn't do things to please her, I knew I wouldn't get the maximum effectiveness out of the night. I would only need to wear it into the spa and out before heading back home. I took a deep breath and grabbed fresh panties to contain my large meat, and put on the matching flats for this fucking dress.
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... letting me go as she walked (to into) her studio. Should be: (to) or (into). Not both.
My mother's body language drastically changed with that and perked up. I saw her smile, "Fine, You have bribed me already, and I will lighten up. Would you please start coming home more often, please? I don't want to find out you knocked up a girl either." My mother told me, letting me go as she walked to into her studio. I moved towards the basement, and I stripped as I entered the basement. I moved over to the shower, knowing that I had no time, really, as I took a lot of it up with my run and freeing the sissy bitch for the weekend. I moved with purpose and got in the shower, not caring that it was a little cold.
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... missing this type of movement ( , ) it felt like ( . ) I was constantly... The comma and period are in the wrong spots. Should be: ... missing this type of movement. It felt like I was constantly on the go recently, ...
With that, I put the phone in my pocket and started to run out from school property without caring about the watching eyes as I sprinted down the street. I felt the wind touched my soaked skin, cooling me down, and the sweat started to restart as I felt the wind lick at my skin. It was refreshing, and I felt alive again. I had let so many things happen lately that I was missing this type of movement, it felt like. I was constantly on the go recently, and that wasn't good for me. I needed to spend time and work on my body like I loved doing.
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... you are sending me (as)... Should be: ... you are sending me (are)...
"Strip sissy, and show me your cage," I told him, turning and grabbing my bag; I grabbed the key from a compartment while the sissy was looking away, rushing to take his clothes off. Soon he was back in his birthday suit with an excited grin on his face. I took the key, and I released him with a small grin. "Take it," I said, handing him the cage and the lock, making him look at me. "If I tell you to come to me this weekend, I want this on you. If you are good during our interaction over the weekend, then I will take it off again. Also, your little porn videos you are sending me as starting to get bland." I said, my voice dry and a little out of breath from today's gym practice catching up to me. "Go get yourself something pretty to put on, and I want you to be fully clothed like a girl for the video."
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... and he turned around (land) put... Should be: ... and he turned around (and) put...
His flush turned a deeper shade of red, and he turned around land put his hands on his knees. "Spread your ass cheeks; I want Alex to see," I told him, and I knew that he was both angry and embarrassed that someone unknown had entered the equation. Still, He knew who was in charge even as he refused to speak due to that same embarrassment. His hands left his knees and reached behind him and spread them wide open. It gave both Alex and me a better view of the black butt plug residing in his asshole, and my hand reached forward.
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... grabbed him suddenly by the (air). Should be: ... grabbed him suddenly by the (hair).
I lost track of time as I put my cum dump into various positions and released more seed into her. I didn't find myself back in control until I looked over her, leaking a large amount of semen dripping from her pussy. Becky's hair was a mess, and she was on her back. Her legs were spread out in a mess on the bed.
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