This chapter was great! I noticed a few minor grammer or spelling mistakes but nothing major. I look forward to the next chapter ♡
Although thr Grammer is a sometimes a little off it isnt bad enough to really take away from the story, which itself is really addicting. I hope to see ot updated soon
I really hope you continue soon, I am really enjoying your story ♡
I love sewing Finn's POV, though I do wish you'd gone into more detail on why he was still with other girls after finding his mate even though he liked her. Great job though!
The Alpha On Campus
Fantasy · Nyxxus