bro, don't mind what other people say . if it's criticism or not, just take it to improve your book or just ignore them. in my opinion, this is a very decent work. i like the interaction between characters. you can still improve your writing and believe when i say there's a lot of potential in this book and the author
+1
[Starting as a Class 5 Mutant]
Starting as a Class Five Mutant
Anime & Comics · Zaelum
thanks for the chapter
thnks philip
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Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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Becoming the strongest in the shinobi world
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w fanfiction keep up the work bro all the support
thanks for the chapter
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