Back back a mess?
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Fantasy · Suiyan
Or the former Planet…
Trading —> trade.
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Fantasy · Suiyan
its not letting me leave an inline comment. last paragraph, about --> amount
Instead —> instance? Not sure if that’s the word that looks to have been autocorrected. In the next instance just seems sounds like odd wording even thought it works.
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Weird, it’s not there anymore. It was 45 the first time and 415 the second. However, now it’s showing 415 for both.
Rean and Roan are doing their best to reach the Void Tempering Realm as soon as possible. If everything goes okay, they will reach that level way before the contest arrives. However, there was no guarantee everything would truly work according to the plan. If they ended up needing more than 415 years, they at least needed to know exactly what was going to happen here.
Fantasy · Suiyan
Bounds —> bonds
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Shouldn’t this be 45 years and not 415?
Rean and Roan are doing their best to reach the Void Tempering Realm as soon as possible. If everything goes okay, they will reach that level way before the contest arrives. However, there was no guarantee everything would truly work according to the plan. If they ended up needing more than 415 years, they at least needed to know exactly what was going to happen here.
Fantasy · Suiyan
Each of you, put on one of these bracelets.
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Fantasy · Suiyan
Could be seen
Death... and me
Fantasy · Suiyan