Sephirot? I'm loving where this is going
"My master, the Sephirot are responding to something." Vinda Rosier, matriarch of the House of Rosier in France, approached Grindelwald and responded in an extremely respectful tone.
Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince
Best of luck! 🤞🍀
Wish me luck..
Anime & Comics · Vidhan_Bhardwaj
.... I was hoping ..😔
Ideas? none at the moment. I just want to enjoy your surprises as they come. I'm curious though. seeing as he was around before Kaguya came in, he should have had a different power source other than chakra. could you like....idk, spin some lore around that. The things that were there before chakra. Also, with how long he has lived, I think it's reasonable enough for him to have a good grasp of nature energy.
I was sceptical at first, but this is actually a great start. I'm looking forward to more chapters
Ahh...i see now. That's okay. Take your time learning
I'm not disregarding the language or anything, on the contrary, it's one that I'm very interested in learning, so I ask that you be patient with me, thank you to those who read it and I hope for your understanding.
Anime & Comics · Gabriel_music
Is Evelyn a she or a he? Please stick with one pronoun.
To say that Evelyn was restless after all that would be a lie, she had never trained since she was born, and she thought she would never need to, she was born to protect this region,And in her first instance of invasion or something, she failed to detect the threat early, failed to gather what troops she had and rushed into her first attack, was overwhelmed in combat, He let a good soldier die and only managed to take a prisoner because she was already unconscious.
Anime & Comics · Gabriel_music
If MC has read lord of the mysteries, he would know about the outer gods. It's inevitable that he'll think of them during his first moments of realising where he is and consequently, they would have noticed him. That's one plot hold i can recognise off the bat. Do you have hidden explanations for that? a connection to the abyss perhaps 🙃
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Nice chapter
I'd like to apply for the proofreader position. Do I apply to the discord?
Proofreader: Proofread and correct the translation (grammar, punctuation, etc.).
God Of Death.
Book&Literature · Wolf_Scan_1525