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First you call it DE, then you call it TE and now SE? what the f**k Man?! make up your mind!

There were dozens of dummies inside the room where I could practice my attacks. The first thing I decided to do was to test my enhanced SE strikes. 

Crimson Rising

Crimson Rising

Book&Literature · Arcane_Eso

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a minor talent in light or illusion magic would do wonders for the MC too.

Which elemental talent do you want for him to have? I currently want to focus on fire.

HP: A Country's Dark Legacy

HP: A Country's Dark Legacy

Book&Literature · DaoistDumbles

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continue please. I'm enjoying this

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Happy birthday author-san!! [img=recommend]

IMPORTANT NOTE: Today is my birthday! Thank you to everyone who is still with me enjoying this Fanfic, I hope you continue to like it. From chapter 31 onwards, all chapters have at least 1500 words. I will post two chapters on Patreon tomorrow.

[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood

[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood

Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince

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why, oh why do they always gender bend Harry? I hope I'm wrong

Anger was a dangerous feeling that made people do the most unthinkable things in moments of uncertainty. He let anger and hatred consume him; he only thought about killing and revenge. Instead of worrying about Rose's safety, he only cared about avenging James and Lily.

[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood

[HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood

Anime & Comics · MaliciousPrince

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it's a great chapter. I know for some the world building might seem boring but I can't stress enough how important this is. Action is good and I love action but this . especially with how you're doing it creates a high quality that is not easy to find.I've been thinking a lot about your idea of the potions being stories and potion making being a kind of ritual. Have you read lord of the mysteries? Because that is what comes to mind every time I think about it. so here's a humble opinion from me. I think you should do some research on the pathways, their potion recipients and the rituals that are used in the higher sequences and see if you can incorporate it into your fiction. I was thinking you can set it as some kind of end goal for Hagrid. "The man who brewed godhood in a bottle" has a nice ring to it don't you think 🤔You could design your own pathway (cuz I don't think any of the originals would fit in here) and have him experiment, discover and create over the course of the story. That aside, I'm curious how you plan on weaving Minerva's life outside of school there's already your issue with side characters but I'm sure you'll do just fine. With Tom, I can already see there's going to be a few chapters with nothing but political talk which I don't really fancy. Oh well...I wish you success in your writing. endless inspiration and all that. complements of the season!! 🎉🎉

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