You do you man, all is good. But i would have loved to see his awakening in greater action. His awakening after all the hype was honestly anti climatic. You could have given a proper intro to his awakeing powers with some real stake and then carry out wth what you planned. Peace.
My bad then
In the discord. Was established as relative to garp and roger, with them having a slight edge.
Nice. The only problem i have with is Indra. You said you wouldn't destroy the established power system by making other characters too strong, but the fact that he can go toe to toe and damage xerxes is ridiculous.
I hoper there are long term consequences for the world government..like losing admirals or something. Cause i still don't see how the marines/world government are gonna win without the five elders personally intervening.
I meant releasing new chapters
But you wouldn't be updating it either right? Also, about that unreleased chapter, just release it ig, would give something yo think about.
I was so hyped to see the notification 😭 But aside from that, personally, i already like what you did with the novel. Infact, out of all your novels, in my opinion, this is your best one yet, atleast interms of the overall setting of the world. The foundation is already stable. But if you want to rewrite it, i will still read it ofcourse, no problem. Its just that the amount of time it will take to catchup again will be alot 😭 So if you want to, go ahead, do what you think is best.
Nice chapter, keep going. I want to ask you something. Are you planning on in any way making damiens subordinates or crew members as strong as emperors? People who were strong to begin with such as aokiji etc. Are still cool, but i seriously hope all his crew members are not garp, whitebeard and roger level at the end. It would REALLY destroy the immersion. Especially Indra. Just don't make him too strong. Him being able to even hurt an admiral was already too much, since we never saw admirals hurt even ONCE except by emperors or by commanders who can hold their own but can't actually hurt them.
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original Path of the Eternal Dao
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In a world where power means everything, where cultivators can shatter mountains and reshape reality itself, Lin Kai takes a different path. While others rush towards power, he seeks understanding. While they force their way through cultivation, he observes the subtle flows of natural law. His azure pendant, a mysterious treasure found with him as an infant, marks him as different—but different isn't always welcome in a world that values brute force over wisdom. At the prestigious Frost Valley Academy, Lin Kai's methodical approach raises eyebrows and questions. Why would a genius cultivator deliberately slow his advancement? What secrets lie behind his unique understanding of cultivation? And why does his presence make even Core Formation masters pause? But those who underestimate him learn quickly—true power isn't just about destroying mountains. Sometimes, the quietest stream cuts the deepest path. Follow Lin Kai's journey as he treads an untaken road of cultivation, where each step reveals new mysteries and each breakthrough reshapes not just his power, but his understanding of reality itself. In a realm where gods walk and immortals scheme, can his path of perfect understanding lead to the peak of power? "Path of Eternal Dao" - Where wisdom meets power, and true strength lies in knowing the way.7 Chs 6 คอลเลกชัน
Shameless Author review here! This is my first novel, so expect blunders here and there. Though I hope to get better soon to churn out better content next time, I hope you can give this novel a try. I TRY to incorporate elements that I like the most from cultivation works. So, expect what you would normally expect from a cultivation novel. Focus would of course be on power progressions, subtle plot points and the vastness of the world, along with the power structure. Hope you people like it.
Path of the Eternal Dao
Eastern · Amv_125