Swiftescape

Swiftescape

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I like certain stories, with pragmatic protagonists.

2020-01-16 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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2 days ago
Commented

This is a straight rip from Reverend Insanity. Will you add anything new to this?

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4 days ago
Replied to DaoistzEswsL

Fully agree.

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4 days ago
Commented

I've never seen anyone in Jjk or mha have the ability to revive people from the dead with absolutely zero repercussions. Why did you believe doing such a thing makes logical sense. It essentially strips all tension and conflict from the novel. If the mc can just revive anyone if they have a sliver of body matter left. You catered to the reader's whim way too much. Thus leading to a product that's unrecognizable from your original intent. I'm not saying you can't listen from time to time. But allowing people who don't understand what it takes to make good content, have heavy influence on the direction of the story. Is utter folly. Honestly, I dropped this novel when I saw you lost your way. Ignore this if you feel this comment is nonsense.

Open comment, and started writing, everything that you think has gone wrong in the story in this chapter, I will read it all, and based on that change everything if it comes down to it.

In MHA with JJK powers.

In MHA with JJK powers.

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4 days ago
Commented

Sigh what a waste of my time. Just a wish granting genie at this point.

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4 days ago
Replied to Benka

Yep, what waste of time.

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5 days ago
Commented

More detail, but no info dumping. I really enjoy seeing an author's take a on beloved world like Pokémon.

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5 days ago
Replied to SonderNow

Is this really a villain novel. If so then I'm interested

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