It's good, but some things can be improved and things can be eliminated, for example the clones, which I think are unnecessary, and as I just read it, I don't know if I can still, but I voted for the harem. Although many do not want it, I believe that a harem in this type of novels where the character is very dominated is better suited to the harem.
I honestly don't think I need to change anything, but I would like to give you a suggestion which is that you should put more missions at least secondary ones.
Good chapter I'm waiting for more
buenas amigo era para darte una sugerencia que el próximos mundos que vaya sean make ki y sekirei mirai kara no okurimono
hola buenas puedo preguntar dónde puedo leerlo en español que no se web novel
no please continue but the truth is that web novel is not like before
Muy buena historia y desarrollo espero que la traduzca, porque es muy buena y más porque hay varias historias parecidas y no las terminan de traducir
es una historia buena e interesante espero ver que si la traducen porque veo varias similares pero no las eligen y al final no la traducen y son muy buenas como esta
It's a very good novel, I wish it continues as it goes and I look forward to the updates 🙏 I want it to be updated like the other novel that is a chapter a day or two, I look forward to the next update
Good chapter, man, why don't you make Eji have a son?
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