I will try to improve it. °.. ^
I am really glad I changed your mind through my story.
Hi, first of all, it is one thousand, not 1,000 k Pisa. I was confused between the American metric system and Indian metric system. Because of your comment, I corrected this mistake. Thk u^^
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Fantasy · Roo77
Could u please tell me what u don't like about my story so I can improve further ?
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Linfel agreed with Connor. "He is right. His actions make everyone look at him like he is shit, but he is still right."
Sci-fi · Suiyan
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"For now," Linfel spoke. "What about after I become Level Two? Then the Yellow Magic Energy will not be enough anymore. I should try to accumulate as much as I can. Think about the future, not only the present."
Sci-fi · Suiyan
Eros is calling V56 because everyone knows knows her as V56. This is her identity and none really call her Veronica.
If V-Fifty-Six hadn't agreed, he would have had to use electric shocks to make her comply. In her current state, it was dangerous for her body. Eros couldn't deny her power, even though she wasn't physically strong enough to fight hordes.
Fantasy · Roo77
So far I have read that I like the story. The world setting of the apocalypse was written very well. And the MC character is quite intriguing. However, the author needs to correct minor errors. Overall it is good reading. Wish you best Author for your new journey! 💙
I am sorry I can't tell whether it's a harem or not. You can read first three chapters and decide yourself. ^^
Evil Lord's Captive Slave
Fantasy · Roo77