Well, at least it's not fapping sounds. Many stories that have goblins show them to be wicked creatures that use women most unpleasantly.
The horde of goblins jumped at her, swarming that poor old woman. Not long after, the air was filled with her screams, drowning in the sounds of stabbing and tearing flesh.
Fantasy · mozziexxxx
I really liked the story, though it seemed to have multiple unexpected arcs. Nevertheless, I enjoyed it. Great job, Artist.
I gotta admit that you do some amazing illustrations. Thank you for spicing up your novel. I'm either not reading enough or you're the only author I know of that offers so much to help readers imagine your world.
Felicia, who had been planning how to approach Allen, had forgotten all of her plans. Her head exploding, she went straight to Allen and pointed to his body. [ILLUSTRATION]
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Did you make that yourself, had it commissioned, or found an accurate picture of what happened?
Felicia, who had been planning how to approach Allen, had forgotten all of her plans. Her head exploding, she went straight to Allen and pointed to his body. [ILLUSTRATION]
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Yuck. Half the chapter is a copy of the other half of the chapter... previous chapters are good. Hopefully this doesn't repeat with later chapters...
Advanced recycling! Reduce, reuse, reanimate!
If you havent already, I highly HIGHLY recommend you avoid status screen usage in your stories at one or less a chapter. Literally over half of this chapter is status screen, and as Camille gets more everything, soon chapters will be nothing but status screen. Otherwise, so far I'm enjoying your writing!
Hopefully, future chapters do not have this many, if at all, paragraph repeats.
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