This guy gets obsessive real fast.
I guess it is the same for my Laura. She simply doesn't see anything wrong in being naked in front of me...not that I was complaining.
Marvel's Phantom
Anime & Comics · Heavens_Monarch
So? Why is she just letting a complete stranger stroke her hips like that.
Laura's hands were balled in my shirt, and her face was pressed in my chest, quietly sniffing. At first, I thought she was crying, but then I noticed that she was taking slow, deep breaths.
Marvel's Phantom
Anime & Comics · Heavens_Monarch
There is just no build up to it... This is just another one of those wish-lust-fullmentt fantasies of an author. Sigh....
Laura's hands were balled in my shirt, and her face was pressed in my chest, quietly sniffing. At first, I thought she was crying, but then I noticed that she was taking slow, deep breaths.
Marvel's Phantom
Anime & Comics · Heavens_Monarch
Author, can you stop making him say his abilities name? It's slightly cringe and sounds like he is a chunibyo. Like naruto yelling Rasengan everytime he uses it.
"Force Dominate; Kneel." Said Leo calmly. To his terror, he fell to his knees without being able to stop himself.
The Greatest Sith Lord
Movies · EternalMonarch
Everyone is a hypocrite in some ways.
'It is either me or them and I am selfish, so yes it is okay. I won't treat my subordinates like Slaves, even if they are... Maybe I am becoming what I hate? As long as I am free then it doesn't matter...' he headed for the place criminals and such gathered. He took 8 of the creatures with him.
The Greatest Sith Lord
Movies · EternalMonarch
You don't have to say the ability...
He closed the box and turned to look back at Lor-Vetan and sighed, "I am not a fan of inflicting pain, I actually despise it; However, This was your punishment so I had to do it; I will now put you out of your misery... Force Drain."
The Greatest Sith Lord
Movies · EternalMonarch
Author, is there going to be romance or nah? The story is cool either way, I'm just curious.
You should start calling them by their actual Villain names. His name is Everyman. I keep getting confused on who you are talking about.
About an hour later went in the house Barry, and behind him came the stone. When they both entered, I heard a muffled sound. This meant that the Faceless one had knocked out Flash... Yeah, the kid's got super speed, but his brain doesn't really work, poor guy. Just as I was about to go to them, Caitlin appeared and went into Allen's house. Immediately after that, I took action...
DC: Hunger
Others · Elkazavar
Gwen is nice. There is also Felicia Hardy (specifically **4 version, she hot af) , creating a chaotic duo with MC, would be fun to read. Jean is overdone and she is too emotional. Rogue, I don't know much about her personality, but I heard she is the most beautiful in Marvel. Jessica Jones would also be a fun read if the author gets her personality right. Scarlet Witch would be a bland duo. There are a lot the author can pair MC with, but he is probably planning on a harem so I'm just reading now until it goes downhill from there. If author changes his mind, then don't get MJ or Jean it's overdone or just completely boring.
...I guess she truly is that age, huh? Girls usually do start liking boys quicker than boys start liking girls. Doesn't mean I can reciprocate anything like that to people around my age - I'm not in the business of liking kids, unlike some sick individuals.
MCU: Viltrumite
Movies · Stan_Wheeler
Okay, I agree that she wasn't raised like a normal girl, but romance novel or not, something like this should not be rushed as it will ruin the whole experience for readers. It just felt cringe. From the way he called her beautiful out of nowhere, my image of him came out a bit of a creep. I'm not hating on your work or anything I'm just trying to help out. Again, don't rush it, romance novel or not and wish-fullfillment or not. Let things build up and you'll have a story that will be satisfying to read.
Laura's hands were balled in my shirt, and her face was pressed in my chest, quietly sniffing. At first, I thought she was crying, but then I noticed that she was taking slow, deep breaths.
Marvel's Phantom
Anime & Comics · Heavens_Monarch