Amazing story with nice characters and world. The grammer is great and the pacing is also good, so sofar amazing. It has a really great potential, so I can easily recommend this to anyone.
Fantasy · Gery_
Wit a Good flow and good characters I think this has a really good potential. How sometimes it has some stupid parts, but it will get better if you continue to read. The soul stone concept is a really interesting idea, so continue writing!
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Amazing story with nice characters and world. The grammer is great and the pacing is also good, so sofar amazing. It has a really great potential, so I can easily recommend this to anyone.
Journey Of A Legend
Fantasy · Gery_