I am not going to lie, this fanfic is slowly becoming one of my favourites. Long have I sought a fanfic of anything magical and medieval where the MC is a person who isn’t some drooling nerd over women, power hungry to the max, edgelord, or horny idiot. Kingdom building is my favourite genre for I love to witness the birth and rise of a civilisation with a Just and Righteous man at the helm. There is character development, and there is world building, a minor amount of grammar mistakes which is by far negligible compared to my happiness reading this. Interactions between our characters especially have been amazing, and I don’t think I need to stress how much of a breath of fresh air this is. Good work author and take my power stones, no matter how minuscule they may be.
This hits hard, League is exactly that
Just yesterday, like every Sunday, I immersed myself in League of Legends before heading to bed—a game that seemed like a loved toxin, as few openly admit to enjoying it, yet many persist in playing. As I drifted into sleep, a peculiar wheel with cryptic inscriptions on each section appeared in my dreams. Squinting, I attempted to decipher the mysterious language, but the writings eluded my understanding as I continued to observe the enigmatic wheel. It started to rotate suddenly, and when the wheel stopped, the inscription transformed to form a golden 'VI.'
Anime & Comics · QuincyEcht
If you only came to upload this to promote your series by edging your readers then at least specify this in the synopsis
The author has definitely shown his ability in quality of writing, perfectly able to encapsulate the types of speech that the setting holds and lacks any spelling mistakes at all. With enough consistency and a steady developing storyline, I believe this can be a great book. My personal favourite is the justified pre-knowledge of the setting due to the MC’s previous lifes’ occupation. Not only does it perfectly explain the information that he knows, but also makes for a very mature and interesting background which he applies to the story. You have a great book here Author, take my powerstones and I eagerly await more chapters.
Aight that's cool
In the name of the Lord, Jesus Christ and the holy spirit I here by condone my own actions which ventured into the realm of carnal desires. Forgive me lord for I have sinned.
bro just be happy this fan fic exists and you get to bask in the eternal happiness of the fantastic mind of the author jeez
'But since Silver was just Level 2…'
Anime & Comics · Abadom
once I dreamt I was watching a documentary of a first person view of a frog dieing to a strange withering substance that instantly killed it and the surroundings
(My dreams are always crazy, tell me yours in the comments...)
Anime & Comics · Abadom
what if it's Warhammer 40k
Not sure how I feel about this, while I understand that it’s creative to mix Warhammer 40k with AOT it seems to me that this is more like a power fantasy then a story. The fights especially leave much to be desired in scale or magnitude, simply ending with the titans having their heads cut off and whatnot. I didn’t like how glory hound the Grey Knights were portrayed, nor how glazed over the settings were especially in the first couple pages. Read it if you want to see a Grey Knight mop titans, other then that I would not have my hopes on up. Sorry this isn’t constructive criticism.