I don't mind getting a paragraph or two on the more technical side of things, but I would rather the story progress.
Can he not just take the ICAT before he’s 18?
If this is Nott thinking, it’s unlikely that he would think of his own family/faction as extremists. He’d think their ideals were natural (unless he doesn’t agree with them).
These three families were once pillars of pure-blood supremacy, but as their influence waned, it left families like the Notts to fill the role of extremists.
Book&Literature · ReduxMagister
This is after Harry’s story?
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Book&Literature · Pequin
Not sure if I’m too late or not, but I saw this house in a Wednesday FF. Gives off magical vibes with it being too wonky like Weasley’s or Lovegoods houses.
Barnaby looked at the model in front of him with resignation. The second year of Hogwarts was about to start, and although he had thought of many things, the most important one, the main house, had yet to be designed.
Book&Literature · Cadenadeaventuras
Probably a bit too late, but shouldn’t it be more of anything? Like more intelligence, more luck, etc.. Or maybe that could be the awakened powers?
[More-More Fruit: Grants the power to multiply the speed, strength, volume, and weight of any touched objects.]
Anime & Comics · CosmicKaminari
Curving bullets from Wanted would be cool. Might have to make sure own gun and bullets though.
Bullet time refers to a slowed time perception state that allows the user to see a bullet travel mid-flight. This was most famously used in the matrix franchise. While Viktor isn't at that level yet, he could be in the future.
Anime & Comics · Viktor_Kyrychenko
"I was watching the tele, when Armstrong made his original one small step, one giant leap statement." Poppy said. "I thought it was interesting and looked up a few things." She'd had a few thoughts about that, too. How was there a camera outside the ship, when Armstrong stepped off, if he was the first one off the ship? That had given her some thoughts, but she just assumed something like a mechanical arm had been extended, or something.
Book&Literature · burnable
Not sure which ones trying to be conveyed, but I view stories as the top of a roof (2 stories = 2 roofs) and floors as well, the floors (2nd floor = 1 roof).
Gradually, he remembered the cause of his injury—he had fallen from the balcony of his house. Although the height was only two stories, he had landed headfirst.
Movies · Raaven
I like this chapter a lot more than the last, but JuhuFrog is right. Try to keep us updated on his Pokémon more often. Even just having Bulbs in the same room so they are strengthening their bond or something.
Pokemon: The Scientist’s Rebirth
Anime & Comics · Nutty_Scientist