bmon

I'm not a fan of multiverse stories or going to multiple worlds. However I give them a chance when I come across them. This one is actually really good. The comedy is nothing that will have you laughing out loud but I constantly had a smile reading chapters. The story in the beginning was alright but the development has proven this Author is improving and will hopefully keep improving. Character design is good some are obviously side characters and the main characters have their own obvious personalities that stick out. The world building is good for the main world, however because he goes to multiple worlds you really can't build too much or the chapters will feel like filler. The main world has enough background and story that it's good.

Very good story. Fights are well written. Emotions displayed very well. The system is good and helps keep track of everything because it would be a lot without it. The writing has almost zero mistakes and the transitions are smooth. The only thing that could potentially ruin this story is if it turns into politics.