Dunwich

Dunwich

male LV 15

I'm just your average eldritch abomination coming to consume everything, even reality itself. Cheers.

2019-09-01 เข้าร่วมแล้ว France
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Dunwich
Dunwich
1 years ago
Replied to Sir_Killington

Monetization on webnovel is... something else. But tbh, I don't feel cheated when I pay for your chapters, so it doesn't bother me. If it's exposure you're after, you made the good choice since it's logical that webnovel will push novels they can actually make money from.

Dunwich
Dunwich
1 years ago
Commented

please don't drop this novel. it's great, it really is.

Dunwich
Dunwich
1 years ago
Commented

I will, Ashen one.

Dunwich
Dunwich
1 years ago
Commented

It's cool to see characters having believable reactions. Good writting. Masterpiece compared to most book on webnovel.

Dunwich
Dunwich
1 years ago
Commented

nice chapter, as always

Dunwich
Dunwich
1 years ago
Commented

so it basically is dark soul

In the case of the Sky Bright Daoist's trials though, it seemed to not focus on cultivation at all. Rather, it was mostly focused on mentality and willpower instead. Lin Wu was sure that if he had to do so many attempts, he would have long since given up.

Rise Of The Worm Sovereign

Rise Of The Worm Sovereign

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Dunwich
Dunwich
1 years ago
Commented

The Tower walks ! just like Numidium, were the dwemer on Morgar ?

Dunwich
Dunwich
1 years ago
Commented

My opinion so far Your writing is very good. Better that 99% of the books on webnovel. You know how to create tension I think however that it would be nice to have some "relaxed" chapter with character bonding / world building. It's important to let the tension drop a bit from time to time so the next stressful moment can be more impactful.

Dunwich
Dunwich
1 years ago
Posted

Probably one of the best book on Webnovel. Avoids every cliché : - No super op plot armor characters - Actual tension in the chapters, - No cringe - Believable characters - Good writing And above all : No harem, no touching your sister, and no rape apology.

Dunwich
Dunwich
1 years ago
Commented

Thank you for the chapter. My opinion so far : - Your writing is good, but be wary of repetitions - You should try to focus your story a bit more : I understand that Noah is an average dude, and his first combat was very difficult. But tbh the story is a bit slow to start. That's ok because it obviously is not your average fantasy novel, but 8 chapter to deal with a couple of monsters seems a bit long. - Kudos for exploring the classical lovecraftian themes of cursed inheritance and hidden horrors beyond our understanding. Can't wait for the next chapter and see what his eldritch body refinement did ! He should get tentacles. Tentacles are very useful, and girls love 'em.

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