HeikyZX

HeikyZX

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2019-08-23 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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HeikyZX
HeikyZX
1 days ago
Commented

The original author simply broke... seriously, what kind of idiot thinks that two whole chapters worthy of rant are readable?

HeikyZX
HeikyZX
2 days ago
Commented

What a exagerated description of him lol. Had been a character like Fischl or Furina, I would understand but this was too much kkk

HeikyZX
HeikyZX
4 days ago
Commented

The excuses for Riveria not teaching him all of her magics just gets worse and worse... the author should have just put more limitations on his magic and get it done in a decent way. A cooldown to 'record' the magic after learning one, a limit on how many he may learn according to his growing capacity...

HeikyZX
HeikyZX
4 days ago
Commented

What a waste of chapters, so much bs as if it couldn't be resolved by simply having self-respect kk

HeikyZX
HeikyZX
4 days ago
Commented

The author sure messed up on this arc... political bs only works when the involved cannot erase cities with supernatural powers. And the part about abandoning the country and leaving, resultin in her being assassinated... she just need to erase her traces with her magic and skip a few nations worth of distance and pick a quiet place to live.

HeikyZX
HeikyZX
4 days ago
Commented

Hopefully, he will acquire some ability to deal with Erosion on himself and others. Otherwise, even if his body and soul can last for thousands of years, his ego will be long gone by then

HeikyZX
HeikyZX
7 days ago
Commented

As always, Geralt gets his arse handed. It is the lilac, no doubts XD

HeikyZX
HeikyZX
7 days ago
Replied to kamidemond

As advice, from what I have learned from reading fics, it is best for you to grab the power scale from top to bottom. For MHA, it would be Peak All Might, Star and Stripe, and Peak AFO - they are the presented 'peak powerhouses', then you slowly descend, and try to fit the MC's power and growth-speed to match the challenges. This is, of course, if you want to make something other than a one-sided 'face-slapping' fight kk. A good example and reference for OP MC with some challenging fights is 'MHA: Horizon(Ope-Ope No Mi)'.

HeikyZX
HeikyZX
7 days ago
Commented

Ma Xiaotao with her Evil Phoenix and the girl with the Ice Staff-something plus the MC's Ultimate Fire and Ice is just bullying.

HeikyZX
HeikyZX
8 days ago
Posted

It had everything to flow nicely in the first chapters but the author chapter after chapter ruined that potential. The MC got OP too fast and too easy, to the point that for the events/fights to last more than a handful of paragraphs, the author used and abused the system's quests to force the MC to do things without his Quirk (wow, how fun, yay). The author also shows absolutely ZERO interest in writing anything that isn't the MC acquiring new and random powers, how great/smart the MC is as he can defeat others without his Quirk, and... that is, I guess. Talks between the characters are rare, as the MC is VERY antisocial and apathetic to everything that isn't himself and his quests (yeah, he values them more than his own life, duh). Then there's the obvious plot armor as the MC will always win or clean the quest even if handicapped or acting without plans. Conclusion: the author wanted to write an MHA fic with an OP and MC that knows no failure, and it is that.

  • Azemos Survive (Edition Stage) original

    Azemos Survive (Edition Stage)

    Fantasy SYSTEM MAGIC SURVIVAL EVOLUTION

    After a hard live as the hope of the people, one of the heros finaly defeat the last Demon King. But in yours last moments, the enemy casted a spell that converted his soul and the body of the hero as energy to send the soul of the hero inside the laws of the Dungeon. Now the former hero shall survive as rise again as a monters, will he hold his old belifs against the Dungeon or change to a new being.

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