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Quite the arrogance!
I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
Eastern · Let me laugh
but if we assume that there are more good people out there... at least more reasonable people. then it is only more beneficial since even if the bad guy get some ultimate technique, there will not be a big gap since the playing field is more even
Song Jinyuan gave a wry smile and said, "I used to think that you casually teaching others the Sword Dao of our master was disrespectful. Now it seems you were the one with foresight. If all of the supreme skills in the world were not hidden away in the hands of individuals and were open for everyone to cultivate, even if they don't succeed, their strength would at least increase, and their ability to protect themselves would be stronger. In times of such chaos, they would have a greater hope to survive."
I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
Eastern · Let me laugh
Gasp!! D-d-dual cultivate?!!? I didn't think our MC is like this!! What will your wife think of you!!
Dugu Wenhun replied with a smile, "I plan to cultivate with him."
I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
Eastern · Let me laugh
the author probably uses Chatgpt to assist his writing. i can see it since i also uses it. nothing wrong with it though
"Yeah... I might be screwed up," Niel sneered, his expression cold and unsettling. He pressed on, undeterred. "But tell you what, I'm having the time of my life here. Trapped with the finest ladies from our university. And Denise," he added, his tone dripping with a sinister edge, "I can hardly wait to get a taste of you."
Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System
Sci-fi · Faux1231
not really, the title didnt say anything abt the System nor did the synopsis. so this review has been really helpful. good job OP, you save me from wasting my time. and you, the guy who complaint, it is our right to complaint abt a book, if we dont allows people to give negative review(which is not this one) then you might as well has no need for review. dont get mad when someone doesnt have the same taste as you.
the only reason you think cultivator is strong is bcs the author wants them to be stupidly strong without any basis or reasoning. i mean how could one person create a whole world out of nothing without breaking a sweat with pure Qi alone? how could one understand a whole book in just a second without flipping the whole book? cultivators seems strong bcs theres no proper theory supporting their power. they just are.you are comparing imagination with reality. you really think that's fair?
'I will remain a mortal and eliminate all cultivators, even if it's the last thing I do.'
Mortal's Insanity: Revenge Against Cultivators
Eastern · Fixten
it is not about who is allowed to kill or not. the purpose of law is to relief the victim from acting out their revenge. and although this may seem unfair for the individuals if it is not done properly. it is many times more beneficial when society has no one allowed to kill just bcs they are a victim.
No matter how righteous his reason, murder was still wrong.
Shocking the Whole Internet! You Are Not a Psychologist at All!
Urban · Netizen thirteen
Tck tck tck. these readers are just crybabies! they're just complaining cause they are jealous! Look at me, i can definitely relate myself w the MC, cause I'm also handsome to the max!🤣
However, a handsome young man closed his shop early amidst the busy street.
Shocking the Whole Internet! You Are Not a Psychologist at All!
Urban · Netizen thirteen
those that like scifi, i have a proposal for a scifi detector to share and i want you to tell me whether its acceptable or utter bs.TLDR: A photon-based sonar detector.the main idea is by directing the light to the empty void in a series, and that if the reflected photon ever get reflected back to the detector, that means the photon had just hit something and we can calculate its position using the red shift or the speed of light. the saving power mode is ofc to use the sunlight to minimize power usage. (just realize this is basically a sonar/echolocation lmao).if you are wondering if this is not just looking with a telescope like normal, the goal is not to get a complete picture of the area, it takes too much resources and computing power. instead the goal is for energy/computing efficient and for a quick way to detect anything abnormal. so if the light that was aimed at a known planet was reflected faster than expected. that means theres an unidentified object flying between the targeted planet and the detector. so this detector works best if you already have a map of the surrounding planet and know how far it takes for the light to return back to the detector (ofc the orbit of earth and the targeted planet are within calculation)
"These are all conventional technologies. Nothing high-tech about them."
People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon
Sci-fi · Silver Lining
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original Talent Beyond the Heaven
The world is not normal, everything doesn't make sense. But it can be fix, for the deal with the devil has been made, and I know exactly what it wants. So it doesn't matter who it is, whether it be the cheat-powered transmigrator, the cunning protagonist, the genius son of heaven, the calculating reincarnator, the all-knowing regressor, or even the almighty System themselves. None shall stand against me. Mark my words. I'll get my end of the deal.2 Chs 14 คอลเลกชัน
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The Gifted System
Xie Yan was an orphan who died after saving his friend from a car accident. But after waking up from what felt like a long slumber, he found himself chosen as a candidate by a being called the Gifted System, an entity offering him the opportunity to become its Host, which also meant a second life. It's condition? Prove yourself as the one worthy. However he wasn't alone, 8 other candidates had also been chosen, with each of them having the capabilities deserving to become the candidate. Determined to reunite with his friends, Xie Yan lunged himself onward to complete the System's test. But alas, this story is for another time. Instead, the story we follow tells the event after he had passed the test, proving himself worthy and becoming the System's Host. And now, finding himself transferred to a world of cultivation. He must gather enough points in order to return to Earth. But as he face many challenges and moral dilemmas in this new world, one wonder if he could ever return home. What you'll find is an adventure of a man thrown into a world where everything is not as it seems, where reality is painted in shades of gray and one must navigate the complexities of this new world to survive and thrive. This is the tale of a jack of all trades master of everything! My Vow: As an author, I pledge to uphold the utmost integrity in all aspects of my work, including the review section of my novel. With a sense of pride and honor on the line, I vow to never manipulate or influence reviews in any way that would compromise their truthfulness or accuracy, but instead to always seek honest and constructive feedback from my readers. Just as a doctor takes an oath to do no harm, I take responsibility to my craft. I will never allow personal gain or malicious intent to cloud my judgment or impact the integrity of my writing. I invite and encourage honest and constructive feedback from readers, knowing that their insights will help me to improve and refine my craft. I promise to listen to your feedback with an open mind and a commitment to continuous improvement. Any reviews that appear to be spam or motivated by ill will will be promptly removed, as I am dedicated to maintaining a review section that accurately reflects readers' opinions of my work. Number of deleted spam: 23 Chs 243 คอลเลกชัน
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Edited Novel
I'm offering to edit the first chapter of your novel for free. and if i am intrigue w the story i may edit more. All i asks is for you to put a credit either on the comment or below the chapter. and naturally you are welcome to refuse using the edited chapter. And also, the chapter that i've edited will be posted here. and no worries, the title of your novel will be posted as the title of the chapter. so in a way its a free publicity... though i doubt anyone would read this... anyway, if you are interested, you could read the chapters here to roughly judge my level of writing. i still have a long way to go but im slowly getting it. 1 chapter = maximum roughly 2000 words. expected result = supposedly 4 - 6 hours but i surprisingly have a life. it may take a day or two. How to request? 2 things. title of the novel and also your Gmail address(discord is also possible). and if you want to help fasten the editing process. pls send me the actual chapter as i am unable to copy it directly from webnovel. (going back and forth from word doc to webnovel is exhausting and felt restricting) My discord: TheUnsuspicious#38372 Chs 1 คอลเลกชัน
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I Shall Collude With The Demon God
Eric Hanover, a man that had achieved success after success. A man gifted in business. After such a long time, he finally felt that it is time for him to rest. He had long achieved his goal. It is time for him to take a step back and focus on fulfilling his duty as a son. And yet, on the day where everything finally ends. He had been summoned by an unknown god. He had been tasked to defeat the demon god that had invaded the world. His response? He refused. Because of his disrespectful behavior. The unknown god removed his divine blessing and sent him to the deepest part of the world, the Abyssal Hollow. "You won't return me back?! Fine! But remember that you are not the only god in this world! Let's see how much regret you will have for summoning me!" _______ That cover is not mine.3 Chs 1 คอลเลกชัน
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I Am The Reaper Of Death
A spirit is trapped inside a skeleton's body. Unable to do anything. He accepted his fate and continues his life. But one day, a book suddenly appeared in front of him. Despite its simplicity. It proclaimed itself as the book of death. The book had chosen the spirit to become the next enforcer of death - The reaper. Out of curiosity, the spirit accepted the offer and receives a life-long mission, a duty. [Killl the immortals!] But how can a mere spirit trapped inside a skeleton's body kill an eternal being? And what happened to the previous owner? This is the tale of a grim reaper. A being that will reap anyone's soul that dares to violate the laws of life and death. _______ I made this story to join the WPS contest. And although this is just a spontaneous decision that I took in the middle of the night. But hey, give this story a chance, will you?3 Chs 2 คอลเลกชัน
bad logic, if that's the case. how about the many prisoners that died from those torture? if death must be paid w another death, then everybody is guilty. even in real life, this logic fails miserably bcs it only leads to perpetual deaths. so dont even mention cultivation world😒
Under the scrutiny of all present, Yu Zhen Daoist had no choice but to say through gritted teeth, "I am naturally here representing Taiqing Xuanjiao... I too wish for peace in the world. If you continue with the slaughter, you will become a demon, and how will all cultivators in the world view you... Murder is paid for with life, it's only fair. The seven Great Saint Clans have wronged you, but you have already killed so many. Isn't it time to..."
I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
Eastern · Let me laugh