No, I haven’t abandoned it. I had real-life stuff to deal with, so I postponed this novel for a while in order to not bring down the overall quality. In the meantime, I've been updating a new novel I've been working on a while back. Do check it out if you want. As for this novel, I'm fixing some old chapters; When I'm done with fixing those chapters, I will start updating again. Thank you for your patience.
ch 311 Espionage Mission Successful
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
Quite attentive, are we? And yes, he supposed to. I will addressed this later. Thank you for mentioning it. Since no one mentioned it until now, I thought no one realized. Either that or they tacitly assumed there was a reason.
So he hurriedly left the safe room and appeared at the location he teleported from, near a village close to the Meistic Forest.
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
Then should I say white or black people? Easterner and Westerner? You know that this paragraph had already been altered to the current neutral stance, and yet you think it's still racist? If you have better suggestions, give it to me, I'll take it. By the way, you're not the first person to mention this part being racist. I don't know why people care about racist this, racist that just from a sentence. Like I said to the other guy, humans are ones who came up these differentiation between the same kind, I am merely using them as is, it doesn't mean I am racist. Furthermore, as the author, I needed to clarify things to make you readers understand my depictions, otherwise, the story would lack essence in general if not already. Anyway, I would be rewriting these chapters and I would think of other ways to express myself without sounding racist until then.
But they all had their downsides and benefits so no one could look down on Spiritual energy. In fact, Spiritual energy cultivation was more popular among the Asians than other races like the westerners.
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
There are four Districts and they do function like a country independently but not entirely as the humans are in an alliance against the same threat, hence sharing the same currency. The Eastern District mostly had Asians and then other races. The Western District had Europeans and Americans and also other races. There are Northern and Southern Districts but those were not introduced completely yet. One thing to note is that the current world or landmass is different from our world.
ch 127 Trouble
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
It doesn't in fact change anything. The execution was something I wanted to try for this novel and that was all. I only added recollection at the end of the first volume because people kept complaining about the thought bubbles/reactions they couldn't see, which led to confusion. If you don't like it, you can drop it at the first volume; those chapters in first volume will be rewritten for clarification later.
After saying so much Randy concluded: "But none of that matters, as I have already awakened my ability now. In that sense, there is no need to know why you both started treating like that."
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
Because he can't store the energy in his body for now, otherwise, he would've done so. Furthermore, even if he could, it would simply devour the other energies in his body if not careful.
Desperate, he tried expelling the energy using the remaining mana in his body, but it got consumed instantly by the dark energy invading his body instead. Therefore, he could only watch as his entire arm gradually turned black.
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
No problem, and sorry about that. I initially intended to rewrite the substitute chapters as fast as I could, but something happened on my end and I couldn't update chapters for a while even though I completed some of the drafts. Once again, sorry for the inconvenience.
Strange Ability, Demonic Transformation, And Observed Yet Again
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
Yes, they've been fixed for a while now.
Strange Ability, Demonic Transformation, And Observed Yet Again
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
You're right. I meant to say meridians and blood vessels. Thanks for pointing that out. I will fix this in due time.
He could feel the energy coursing through his veins and then traveling his blood vessels as they made their way towards his heart area before setting in his mana seed that was created during his awakening.
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
Don't worry, there won't be any noticeable changes besides the increased explanation or rewritten paragraphs for legibility. The dialogues would also be rewritten for more clarity to prevent ambiguity of their conversations. In other words, it won't change the formation of the story overall. So whether you read the old or new version, you'll still get the same impression, nonetheless.
ch 149 A Concerned Parent's Action
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
I know right, what's wrong with the author? Even a middle-schooler should know this. The right way should be: "I wasn't frolicking with him!" or "I wasn't frolicking with anyone!" I don't know why I even read novels like this, where the author doesn't know their grammar but still decide to write a story anyway. As a fellow author, I have to give it to them straight. . . . 🤭😆😂🤣😛 I will be rewriting all these chapters anyway, so I will fix all the grammatic errors then, don't worry.😉
"I wasn't frolicking with nobody. You know better than I do, that he was only my childhood friend. Besides, you…" Emilia was shocked by her mother's words, and she replied refuting her but did not finish the latter part of her sentence, only saying finishing it in her head. 'You used to like him a lot when he was young, but why are suddenly acting like this just because he couldn't awaken his ability?'
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
it's because he's afraid/scared of revealing it to his parents. Think of it as him feeling uncertain about what to expect and thus making excuses to surprise them or something like that. This is because his mental is unstable[trauma] after what he'd endured. Anyway, I will be probably rewrite all the beginning chapters since my explanation and writing style and writing quality was still developing when I wrote those chapters. It had led to confusion from readers, especially about the unstability of the main character's sporadic actions, which was somewhat intentional. By the way, I already rewrote chapter 1 and added more details, which increased the word count by a lot but it doesn't matter since no one get charged for early chapters anyway.😉 But I still plan on rewriting them for more clarity.
ch 149 A Concerned Parent's Action
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
Thanks, will fix it now.
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Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
Don't mind me, carry on, just testing.
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Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
Testing again, don't mind me.
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Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
Would this comment section vanish? Testing, testing from author.
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Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven
In a few days, maybe. I'm not sure when exactly, but I'll try to update it as soon as possible once I'm less busy.
ch 29 Mysterious Phenomenon, Departure
Material Conversion
Fantasy · BadMindDarkRaven