if the Mana diaster does happen, he should mana location bracelets or something that could help him locate his family in case it happens. and even if it doesn't happen, it could be helpful later if someone gets kidnap.(that's if he knows of to create such a device or he can buy one if it already exists)
it's your story, do you. I wasn't really complaining, just giving my opinion. the story is great so far, so I trust in your judgment.
But the thought that I could potentially do whatever I want in this world without worrying about consequences was quite pleasant.
Anime & Comics · Jaed21
I just hope he doesn't become a self-centered hobo killer that acts like a young master....only because he has a lot of power. because contrary to what people think might doesn't always make right.
But the thought that I could potentially do whatever I want in this world without worrying about consequences was quite pleasant.
Anime & Comics · Jaed21
thank God I am not the only one who thinks the "story" doesn't seem right...
we never know. fantasy world DNA and birth aren't the same as the real world. look at elden ring, some people shouldn't even exist if we go by earth logic..anyway all this to say kids don't forget protection.
I looked over at the fair skinned girl lying on my bed, her naked form concealed only by a sheet of cloth that failed to hide the shape of her perky breasts. Her long brown hair was strewn across the feather pillow as she lay on her side, facing me.
Book&Literature · Bleap
noice one of the best novel I've read. to bad it doesn't have a sequel🥲
It was one training method I adapted from the 'Mother of Learning' novel.
Anime & Comics · Jaed21
lmao that's so accurate 🤣
which other books? I only see this one in his profile.(its a genuine question I am not trying to be a jerk)
Nice chapter! However, I noticed that you use "and" quite often. It disrupts the flow for me, especially when there are four instances in a single paragraph that could be replaced with other words like "also," or omitted entirely. Please don't take this as negative criticism—I love the story. I'm just suggesting that you re-read the chapter to ensure it flows smoothly.
he should make*
Reincarnated in Mushoku Tensei: Realistically Overpowered (rewrite)
Anime & Comics · Jaed21