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im liking this story so far the main character is tolerable unlike other stories ive read and the other characters so far are well done as well as the world you have built so far im looking forward to see where you take it keep up the great work

ok i really loved this story read a good bit of it but sadly dropped it myself for 2 reasons 1 was the thing with his wand but i was ok with it didnt really bother me as much was a downer but eh whatever the main one was with the vaults a specific vault the vault that causes the soul problem the rest of the vaults where ok was a good concept and made it interesting but that specific vault ruined my image of who Quinn west was i dropped it after that because i couldn't see him the same anymore after that like he was a completely different mc i read for a while after that still but cant see him the same it ruined his character for me but is still a good read and i still say give the story a shot i know its a run on sentence put up with it lol