TheYoungPyromancer

TheYoungPyromancer

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2019-05-22 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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TheYoungPyromancer
TheYoungPyromancer
1 days ago
Commented

Treating violating someone’s boundaries as humorous or romantic is just wrong. The story seems to be leaning more and more in that direction. I despise it.

TheYoungPyromancer
TheYoungPyromancer
1 days ago
Commented

I hate this

A side that spoke of helplessness, of trust, a trust that had never been given to anyone but her.

Wait, My Overpowered Skill is Just… Love?!

Wait, My Overpowered Skill is Just… Love?!

Fantasy · S0FTNW3T

TheYoungPyromancer
TheYoungPyromancer
1 days ago
Commented

I really hope Cecilia is able to fix her relationship with Selene into something that’s vaguely healthy, into one where her emotions and desires aren’t just completely ignored like this. But I’m afraid with the way the story is going that’s not goin to happen. It seems to be pushing Cecilia secretly liking it, which is… just horrible. This story reminds me of the reason I despise the concept of soulmates. I very much get Cecilia’s initial reaction, and I can’t help but imagine how I’d feel if I were in that situation. If this story keeps going the way it has been, not only is it bad writing, (failing to establish Selene as a proper character that exists outside of her feelings, making Cecilia’s feelings not only feel forced but literally be forced, failing to establish even the slightest bit of chemistry between them, etc.) but it is going to start becoming actively harmful by promoting an abusive relationship.

TheYoungPyromancer
TheYoungPyromancer
2 days ago
Posted

Unlike the trashy romances you come to expect from fanfiction, this story actually is well written, and the characters have romantic chemistry without acting out of character. A rare gem of a story, and possibly the best Star Rail fanfic I’ve read.

TheYoungPyromancer
TheYoungPyromancer
2 days ago
Commented

What’s good about this story is it actually has little scenes like this. It isn’t your normal poorly-written romance where they don’t actually have any chemistry- here Acheron actually acts like a friend who’s on the border of becoming something more.

TheYoungPyromancer
TheYoungPyromancer
4 days ago
Commented

Kukukuku… as expected of the Supreme Archbishop

TheYoungPyromancer
TheYoungPyromancer
4 days ago
Commented

Emerald = Jade

"And in your later fraud case, you caused such a huge commotion, yet not a single person profited from it—why?" Emerald's voice carried a hint of scrutiny.

I just wanted you to make a movie: You made a Honkai Star Rail movie

I just wanted you to make a movie: You made a Honkai Star Rail movie

Video Games · LordIsland

TheYoungPyromancer
TheYoungPyromancer
5 days ago
Commented

Lore error- AI is forbidden within the city, so X’s thoughts are inconsistent with the setting.

TheYoungPyromancer
TheYoungPyromancer
5 days ago
Commented

So busy saving Furina she forgot to save Focalors… Poor Archon.

TheYoungPyromancer
TheYoungPyromancer
6 days ago
Posted

A great story. It combines the best aspects of react fics with an actual plot, while eliminating the drudgery that often crops up with a bunch of characters reacting to random stuff that doesn’t involve them.