Antoine_Perez

LV 5
2019-05-18 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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Antoine_Perez
Antoine_Perez
1 months ago
Posted

the story pacing is sooooo slow... the author dwells on thoughts of chracters even insignificant thoughts an doften repetitive.

Antoine_Perez
Antoine_Perez
1 months ago
Commented

author you know what? your dragging the story....idwelling on thoughts of minor characters...if this is the phase you have scammed us of our coins

Antoine_Perez
Antoine_Perez
2 months ago
Posted

the story tends to drag, many unnecessary filers or chapters are added to make the story longer. .it focus on certain emotions of the FL.

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Antoine_Perez
Antoine_Perez
3 months ago
Commented

song lefie youre the man...Xin zhaozho is the most pretentioness 2nd FL in. web novel...

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Antoine_Perez
Antoine_Perez
4 months ago
Commented

agree he is really simple minded...

Antoine_Perez
Antoine_Perez
5 months ago
Commented

both of these side characters are not good. end their story and move on to the next

Antoine_Perez
Antoine_Perez
5 months ago
Commented

no fighting spirit at al so passive to accept it..hmp change the FL pls

Antoine_Perez
Antoine_Perez
5 months ago
Commented

agree their story is just going around circles....what a waste of coins