TheDaydreamer

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“The question isn’t who is going to let me: it’s who is going to stop me.”

2019-05-03 เข้าร่วมแล้ว France
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TheDaydreamer
TheDaydreamer
6 months ago
Commented

"interest" instead of "interesting" :)

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Dreadwolf, Lord of Runes

Dreadwolf, Lord of Runes

Fantasy · FrostyPaws

TheDaydreamer
TheDaydreamer
6 months ago
Commented

I think "suffice it say" should be "suffice it to say" ("it" isn't mandatory but "to" is in this idiom).

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Dreadwolf, Lord of Runes

Dreadwolf, Lord of Runes

Fantasy · FrostyPaws

TheDaydreamer
TheDaydreamer
7 months ago
Commented

"Luna" instead of "Lune". First mistake spotted after 15 chapters, well done on the proofreading! ^^

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Dreadwolf, Lord of Runes

Dreadwolf, Lord of Runes

Fantasy · FrostyPaws

TheDaydreamer
TheDaydreamer
7 months ago
Replied to FrostyPaws

I don't know if Webnovel is being buggy but I don't see anything different on my end ^^

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A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

Fantasy · FrostyPaws

TheDaydreamer
TheDaydreamer
7 months ago
Commented

"but than" should be "but then" :)

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A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

Fantasy · FrostyPaws

TheDaydreamer
TheDaydreamer
7 months ago
Commented

"Erik than smiled" should be "Erik then smiled" :)

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A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

Fantasy · FrostyPaws

TheDaydreamer
TheDaydreamer
7 months ago
Commented

"she doesn't seem to know about a lot about fairies" => the first "about" should be deleted ^^

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A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

Fantasy · FrostyPaws

TheDaydreamer
TheDaydreamer
7 months ago
Commented

"then" instead of "than" :p

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A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

Fantasy · FrostyPaws

TheDaydreamer
TheDaydreamer
7 months ago
Commented

"Erik resisted and stayed in place" instead of "Erik resisted stayed in place" :)

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A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

Fantasy · FrostyPaws

TheDaydreamer
TheDaydreamer
7 months ago
Commented

"then we simply have to" instead of "than" ^^

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A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

A Wolf's Howl, A Fairy's Wing

Fantasy · FrostyPaws

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