BrazilianGoodGuy

Broken

Obrigado pelos capítulos, fanfic de alta qualidade!

I really don't understand why so much work if you have almost 20 people who could ALONE win this "war", it wasn't exactly clear if the whole guild goes to the bigger world, because if not everyone there's no point in him creating a guild and recruiting random people, at this point in the story with so much that has already happened the plot should be completely different from the original, I think the author has the ability to distance himself from what LOC has already written and still be good and cohesive. Sorry for the rant, but it was making me sleepy rereading something I've already read but under completely different circumstances.

Estou tentando, primeira vez que escrevo algo, vou me esforçar para melhorar.

Ele pode ir pro mundo de Against The Gods, lá é relativamente fácil pegar alguns tesouros celestiais, veias de um deus maligno e linhagens de feras míticas...

changes were made? do i need to reread?

Great story so far. Please dont drop

Not that Zach hasn't played against strong teams before... It doesn't make sense that his A+ dribbling skills are below average. As the system is quantifiable it knows exactly your skill level and there is no reason to lack confidence when all your skills are above A+ (assuming the sport's peak peak is probably S+)

The problem with this argument is that Zachary has visible ways of figuring out how he's going to perform, the system doesn't show any statistics really bad enough to lack confidence, and I lack the ability to be able to see the "level" of other players.