Let there be only chaos. If you have any questions or just wanna talk hmu on discord: @messiahofeden
2019-04-16 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
Thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it so far!
Iblis's hair writhed as if alive, tendrils of shadow and flame intertwining in a hypnotic dance.
Fantasy · Freakshow
Don't worry man I don't take it offensively. On the contrary, I am open to all opinions! Also, I do agree with you, the main character is naive, but will go through a lot of trauma to shape him into a more ruthless character! You can continue reading and you will see!
The author argued that harmony could only be achieved through understanding, that even the most bitter enemies could find common ground if they only took the time to listen.
Fantasy · Freakshow
You are correct, and also it is a way of mocking Iblis as in Khaliq thinks that he will win this wager easily even at disadvantage because the « historical figures » who love humanity will outperform the harbringers who hate humanity because they were betrayed by it simply because of the existence of the indomitable human spirit! The harbringers sort of rejected their humanity and became non human with powers. But I wonder, who will win, Khaliq,Iblis, or none of them?
ch 13 The Way of the Sword
Fantasy · Freakshow
yesssir I love record of ragnarok, you will notice a bit of its influence in one of the arcs of this novel!
"Nostradamus." The enigmatic seer appeared, his eyes seeming to look beyond the present moment. "His foresight will help guide our efforts through the tumultuous times ahead."
Fantasy · Freakshow
its an arthur conan doyle classic sentence, a study plus something looks cool!
Where Khaliq was all clean lines and controlled power, Iblis was a study in barely contained chaos.
Fantasy · Freakshow
I would be lying if I said I wasn't inspired by Faust a little bit. It's one of the best classics!
ch 0 2 The Wager of Gods
Fantasy · Freakshow
Like I said before the luminaries do not have special abilities except Atenzi, on the other hand, the harbingers do have abilities but I prefer to leave them unshown until the character is presented, that way there will be some suspense! And the luminaries will meet Atenzi randomly, it's like a gravitational pull, as if they pull each other and Atenzi will meet each one when he needs him most! get it? If you have any other questions my friend, I am more than happy to answer them all!!!
ch 13 The Way of the Sword
Fantasy · Freakshow
Sometimes in order to attain the greater good you must be ruthless!
ch 0 7 The Price of Power
Fantasy · Freakshow
Thank you!
ch 0 6 The Ersatz Messiah Unleashed
Fantasy · Freakshow
I will do my best!
ch 0 2 The Wager of Gods
Fantasy · Freakshow
Thank you for your opinion, my friend! Any criticism is more than welcome so I can become a better author! I am still a newbie so thank you again!
To them, he was nothing more than an obstacle, a means to an end.
Fantasy · Freakshow
thank you for your comment!
The author argued that harmony could only be achieved through understanding, that even the most bitter enemies could find common ground if they only took the time to listen.
Fantasy · Freakshow
Sorry for replying so late, I didn't see your message! That is an interesting idea indeed, but it would be too slow for this novel pace. But it will be all over the place, where it is said that Atenzi's true nature is a devious man and a battle and blood lover.
ch 0 4 Chains of Destiny
Fantasy · Freakshow
Spies that knew that Henry had been overthrown. Bloodmire is known for its vampire spies because they excel in hiding in plain sight!
Had the Crimson Countess been waiting for this moment of vulnerability?
Fantasy · Freakshow
There will be more, enjoy!
He was willing to defend himself and not lose his wallet etc. But the thugs' main goal wasn't only getting his money but also hurting him, a major factor of how humanity can be cruel and have no remorse!
To them, he was nothing more than an obstacle, a means to an end.
God Breaker: The Ersatz Messiah
Fantasy · Freakshow