AKASHIIIi

AKASHIIIi

male LV 3
2020-05-23 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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AKASHIIIi
AKASHIIIi
24 seconds ago
Commented

So he's just going to take advantage of her innocence and lack of understanding of the rules of behavior? Or does she know exactly what she's doing? A lot depends on it.

AKASHIIIi
AKASHIIIi
AKASHIIIi
17 hours ago
Posted

Small responses to previous reviews: 1. I did not notice any significant problems with grammar. 2. Why complain about the lack of a rape warning if there wasn't even one? Mah, I really like this job. But she has serious problems. 1. The Evil Dumbledore. Very boring and stupid. 2. Lack of logic. It has been shown that teachers are constrained by a certain seal. So why aren't teachers responsible for protecting students? You don't think that the founders of the school are so stupid that they didn't provide for such a thing, do you? And yes, I don't think the stupidity of the plot can be justified by canon. Like if the plot of the original doesn't make sense, then the plot of the fanfiction should be just as stupid?

AKASHIIIi
AKASHIIIi
17 hours ago
Commented

Because of Kate, his girlfriend could be seriously injured, or even die, but of course the main character won't do anything about it. But Peter, who was provoked, was punished. Very logical.

AKASHIIIi
AKASHIIIi
18 hours ago
Commented

So he just left Indigo's body?

AKASHIIIi
AKASHIIIi
21 hours ago
Replied to Ayoub_AMZ

So constant insults in the presence of his girlfriend and friend are normal?

AKASHIIIi
AKASHIIIi
21 hours ago
Commented

Why is the main character trying to bring them together? He said he didn't like her. And he is absolutely right - such girls are not worthy of normal guys, they need "cool" ones.

AKASHIIIi
AKASHIIIi
21 hours ago
Commented

Is he definitely an alpha? I don't think an alpha will submit to a girl's silly tantrums over and over again.

AKASHIIIi
AKASHIIIi
1 days ago
Replied to AKASHIIIi

I'm not saying it needs to be done. I'm just wondering if there is such a possibility in principle.

AKASHIIIi
AKASHIIIi
1 days ago
Commented

I'm wondering if there's any way to challenge the judge's decision and get him disqualified for a while? After all, you can't leave a tackle from behind unpunished. It literally has a high chance of destroying a person's football career.