Yo I’d be down, just lemme know, I left a comment on chapter 27 on ur Patrn as well
P.S. I need someone for story feedback on this one and the new one. Anyone interested? I'll give you membership gifts in return. Not expecting answers this time either, but hey - hope dies last, right?
Naruto: Fate System
Anime & Comics · Malphegor
Thanks for the chap, I really enjoy this story. A pretty fresh take on Naruto
Nah man, u can’t take peoples feedback too seriously. Then the story becomes the product of the least common denominator. I personally think the Hiruzen first person was gold, and it couldn’t have been done the same in 3rd. Especially given how diffferent he is portrayed throughout fanfics, it was pretty important to establish Hiruzens character. Shisui’s perspective might need some work (only in my opinion tho) so I feel you might get criticism for that, but first person, overall, can be a really cool tool to use like you have been doing. I know that it’s ironic, me giving advice to not listen to advice from people like me, but I hope you get the gist of what I’m trying to say. I like the story btw, I hope you keep enjoying writing it.
[A/N] Based on feedback received, POV's other than Satoshi's will now be Third Person: (he said, she did, Shisui ran, etc.) instead of First Person: (I said, I did, I ran, etc.). I will revise the earlier chapters at a later date.
Reborn as a Yamanaka Genius
Anime & Comics · DreamSomeday
Translation quality is dropping hard
Bruh at first I was like, ‘thank goodness that chaoter was a vision and not a time skip, then I was like, ‘dang it mom why you gotta be so heavy handed with your memory magic!’. I gotta say, I hope he gets his memory back and finds a way to get hers back too. I think they deserve to remember each other
This is plagiarized. The whole story is out on ff.net and it’s titled something like ‘threads of fate’
Yo a rewrite? I was literally reeeading this like a couple weeks ago and I’m excited to see what you’ve got coming
I like it. But also, maybe it was in purpose and it will be explained later, but the locket requires parstle tongue to open, and Voldemort was the one who made the cave and its contents in the canon
Not bad, but there are some pretty crucial chapters that are just reuploads of a previous chapter, and the actual chapter is missing. This makes it a little annoying to read, but hopefully It will get fixed.
I am a fan of this book and am enjoying it. I appreciate that you are translating it for us to enjoy, but this chapter really was rough to read. The quality dropped a lot, don’t know if it is just a mistake or if this is the new standard, but it’s really difficult to read
Konoha: Sage Body
Anime & Comics · Silana