Why do you tend to use different names for the same character without any lead or explanation for the reader to understand and easier to follow? Like whether it's Damien or hunter? Be consistent pls.
Although Cora seemed to be a hot-tempered person, in fact, she was a proud and sentimental person. She knew that hunter must have broken Cora's heart, so she ran away from the wedding.
Urban · black_flowertrend
Another rerun again?
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Urban · black_flowertrend
Another reruns? A little too many.
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Urban · black_flowertrend
What is this?
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Urban · black_flowertrend
Why is Wyatt's name mentioned interchangebly with Joe? The author is confusing me.
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Urban · black_flowertrend
My gosh, more repeats?!
Alexa showed him the menu and said with excitement, "We came here to choose a birthday cake for Mommy!"
Urban · black_flowertrend
Typo errors.....
Alexa showed him the menu end seid with excitement, "We came here to choose a birthday cake for Mommy!"
Urban · black_flowertrend
So many repeated para?!
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Urban · black_flowertrend
Repeated sentence.
Looking at the expectant eyes of her colleagues, she knew that she could not say no.
Urban · black_flowertrend
Why Mr Robinson?
"Yes Mr. Robinson, I'll deliver that piece of news to you myself,"
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