shadowsnake_13

male LV 12

I like to read good Harem novel and would like to write one. but I bad at spelling and grammer.

2019-02-16 เข้าร่วมแล้ว United States
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ป้าย 11

Moments 95
shadowsnake_13
shadowsnake_13
1 months ago
Commented

now you're making it sound like he's not even a child when you have him playing as a child from the beginning because a child does not agree to this if they can't be with their parents they normally say scream and cry bloody murder because they will not leave and their parents

We stand up, and she kneels in front of me. "Listen to what I'm about to say, Nathan... Your parents won't be around anymore after today, and you won't be seeing them again." I look at my mom and see the tears falling from her eyes. "Nathan, from now on, you are going to start learning the ways of the force and the Jedi. We are going to teach you everything we can about the force. I need you to give your parents and me some privacy. Go and explore the grounds. I'll come and get you so you can say goodbye." I'm holding my tears back as best as I can. I walk to the door and exit with a feeling of total emptiness. It completely sucks... I don't want them to go...

Star Wars: A Single Wish

Star Wars: A Single Wish

Video Games · easyread

shadowsnake_13
shadowsnake_13
1 months ago
Commented

and apparently the Jedi in your story do not listen to a very powerful being that tells them that they're social or society will come down in the blaze of glory in his hands if should they teach him or interfere with him but hey that's okay you just made them look like idiots I don't know maybe listen to the being that can manipulate their their own memories of them to interfere with the future but okay you make everyone sound like idiot but if that's what you want to go for go on

He looks in the direction of my parents, and so do I. "You love them very much... Whatever happens to them will affect you greatly. I want you to come with Jace and me to Tython. We can teach you how to control your powers." I look at him and see no hesitation or doubt in his eyes.

Star Wars: A Single Wish

Star Wars: A Single Wish

Video Games · easyread

shadowsnake_13
shadowsnake_13
1 months ago
Commented

have you never heard of stranger danger why is this kid listening to a complete strangers over his own parents and his parents did explain it to him for a kid that should have been that simple they don't have complicated thoughts like that I remember being a kid and I don't remember having those kind of complicated thoughts your parents told you you had abilities like a superhero you believe them

I look up, and all the debris, trees, and rubble have stopped spinning and are now just floating in place. I see my mom and dad running behind Conobai right now. I watch them approach, but aunt stops them from getting any closer. Only Conobai approaches alone. He slows down and looks at me, and instead of saying anything, he sits next to me. "Do you think you can drop all this?" I shake my head no because I don't know how to. "Okay, take deep breaths and focus on clearing your mind. Then let go of any emotion you are feeling right now." I follow his instructions.

Star Wars: A Single Wish

Star Wars: A Single Wish

Video Games · easyread

shadowsnake_13
shadowsnake_13
2 months ago
Commented

the first to 10 is when when they get to 10 is when they get their first Spirit ring every 10 not every 20 because you got their first Spirit ring on their 20th level what happened to 10 if you listen to it what redo the novels and manga you'll realize you messed up on the ring

shadowsnake_13
shadowsnake_13
2 months ago
Commented

if you're going to do a Spider-Man fanfic you better do it as Spider-Man not as someone you want you but it might as well make your own character your own superpowers and not be Spider-Man cuz you're not Spider-Man if you're not Spider-Man

[Chose if you want to be reborn as Peter Park or reborn as yourself] "Screw being reborn as Peter Parker. I want to become my own legend," Jake quickly chose reborn as himself.

Spiderman Evolution

Spiderman Evolution

Anime & Comics · GhostyGodZ

shadowsnake_13
shadowsnake_13
2 months ago
Commented

I have a question every fan once in awhile a fanfic is written when they're given the option to change race they decide to stay human why you lived as a human already it's not that great when there's other chances other experiences you could actually go through there are other traits that other races have in the fantasy world wouldn't you want to write about that oh I want to be human what what does human have arrogance destructive abilities always wanting to destroy too far to control and to dominate over others that's about it every other creature in the fantasy world has other things going for them but okay it's your story go for it but I'm stopping here

A 3D model of now appeared on the screen with information beside it. Rictus read the information of himself: male, half Breton half Nord, 22, brown hair, brown eyes, 6'2 (or 1.88m for the rest of the world), 235 lbs (106kg). The image showed a slightly above average looks with a strong jaw covered by a short beard and a medium build with a bit of a belly. The race of being half Breton and Nord was new. After selecting the race tab, all the normal ones appeared as well as combinations for most of the races. Not finding any information about the bonuses of each race or even a description, Rictus decides to just leave it alone. 'Thinking logically, it should hopefully just be a combination of the two so a little frost resistance and better magic is the hope. Besides, depending on how immersive the game is, being at least part Nord in Skyrim would be better than not being a Nord at all.' With that thought, Rictus just accepts his character exactly as it appears. 'Yes, I could have made myself more attractive or at least gotten rid of some of this fat, but I am confident in myself and want a more realistic experience. Definitely not because I am lazy…'

Altering Skyrim

Altering Skyrim

Video Games · Pepey_LePew

shadowsnake_13
shadowsnake_13
2 months ago
Commented

this here is why people drop your story your novel in the world of soul land The Spirit Hall was an evil organization who wanted to dominate the world led by a man who wanted to be a god and believe everyone should bow down to him as such and you sent the main character to join them that's why

Yue Quan sighed and said :"Boy would you like to join the Spirit Hall? With your twin martial spirit, you can even become The Majesty's disciple!"

Reincarnated in my own Douluo Dalu Fanfiction?!

Reincarnated in my own Douluo Dalu Fanfiction?!

Anime & Comics · Akkuzz_69

shadowsnake_13
shadowsnake_13
2 months ago
Commented

that's not a sword that's a lance it says things that people use when they gels

I opened my right palm and saw a sword, the heft is golden in color with purple linings and the blade was black with many red lines on it. (A/n: Picture here)

Reincarnated in my own Douluo Dalu Fanfiction?!

Reincarnated in my own Douluo Dalu Fanfiction?!

Anime & Comics · Akkuzz_69

shadowsnake_13
shadowsnake_13
1 years ago
Commented

I can ignore the fact that some of this s*** that they're so called humans are doing treating an alien like a human being I can ignore that but the moment you send an alien that looks like a f****** alien to go make a group of people on it and human world is f****** stupid I'm dropping this s*** because of that no human go okay alien from another world I'm going to work with you

Hondo Ohnaka was a Weequay male and an infamous pirate and outlaw who operated throughout the galaxy.

star wars system in marvel

star wars system in marvel

Movies · Hunter931

shadowsnake_13
shadowsnake_13
2 years ago
Commented

Strong ? that is little don't kid yourself

'Damn, I never thought my weapon was this strong…'

Supreme Harem God System

Supreme Harem God System

Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth