It's starting to feel like too much drama/f**kup's from mc. This Saren situation seems a little like a forced plot point. Otherwise i have liked this novel!
Do you have any news about your data/computer? I look forward to the continuation of both of your stories.
Ciao, and see you all when I can get the data back.
Twilight: Rebirth
Movies · DumbedDown
Wasn't the goblin supposed to be unable to get the knowlage from the vault 12 (memory/ghost's)? How did he know about it? Did i miss something??? p.s. This "feels" to be a truly dissapointing plot twist.
It's dissapointing that even after everything the story still follows almost exactly the movie....😑 (the world is different, the family is different and the start was different... how is Apollo is still the same..... what about the things his biological parents gave him...🤔
I like this fanfic. It's one of the better ones 😘 I'd like you to continue goin forfard without re-writes. (but i also wish that you would give him a litle bit more "humane" touch. That he fould "care" more about people and the world. He would have a romantic partner or two 😏 but no more than three. Also to evolve the fightin a litle bit from "spamming" the swords to "spamming" the swords kill the mops while personally fighting the important opponents 😁) Thank you for so far 😊
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I don't like the drug use in the story. It makes it hard to become absorbed in the story.
{Do not do drugs, I am not promoting them either as I write these. This is purely for fun nothing more, nothing less.}
Twilight: Really! I Didn't Ask For This!
Movies · Flaming_Lines
Drug CPH4 from movie Lucy or would it be too over powered? (final form/god mode?)
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Marvel: Tech System
Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
sailing on a boat?
Geralt and Wayne bid farewell to their fellow companions and swiftly departed from the castle, making their way to the lake. Wayne's prior efforts had cleared the lake of the troublesome water monsters, making their journey much smoother. With no more interruptions from these bothersome creatures, they easily located a dilapidated boat and embarked on their swim to the opposite shore of the lake, one step closer to their destination.
Witcher: The Half Elf
Book&Literature · LIl_wretch
some where here because how Bella broke the rock with her had so easily.
The story starts good but it will slip gradually more and more in to the Chinise worldview until the story becomes unreadable.
America: Beginning with the acquisition of MGM
Movies · Raaven