dragon544

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dragon544
dragon544
1 days ago
Posted

The way you get more people to read your story is more frequent updates. I already knew this story would never get finished. (reason 1) chapter frequency 1 chapter every 2 or 3 weeks is a big red flag for any fanfiction. at minimum it should be 3 chapters a week if you can't do that for whatever reason then it should be at least 1 chapter a week. (reason 2) not one teenwolf weretiger fanfiction has ever been completed or gone past 20 or more chapters. This story is great nothing is wrong story Wise it is the above problems that are the issue.

dragon544
dragon544
2 days ago
Replied to R0B

Machine translation is use of computational techniques to translate text or speech from one language to another, including the contextual, idiomatic and pragmatic nuances of both languages.🙂

dragon544
dragon544
2 days ago
Replied to Semuel_Set

machine translation is what MTL stands for. Machine translation is use of computational techniques to translate text or speech from one language to another, including the contextual, idiomatic and pragmatic nuances of both languages. hope this helps.🙂

dragon544
dragon544
2 months ago
Posted

what nobody's talking about is the writing quality. man this has alot of grammatical errors and i mean alot. from beginning to end there are spelling and grammar errors and it seems like there will be no improvement moving forward. you should do what another fanfic did where they made a chapter and edited the chapter making sure there were as little amounts of errors in the chapters. they were translating a fanfiction and they manually edited every chapter to make sure every chapter was desent. otherwise story is good character design is fine not good but fine.

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dragon544
dragon544
6 months ago
Replied to dragon544

I just chose ships that are big and have big guns

Since it was too big, he needed to release it a little deep waters. And to do that, he had to be far from the island where people are present.

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dragon544
dragon544
6 months ago
Commented

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Since it was too big, he needed to release it a little deep waters. And to do that, he had to be far from the island where people are present.

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dragon544
dragon544
6 months ago
Commented

pick one

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Since it was too big, he needed to release it a little deep waters. And to do that, he had to be far from the island where people are present.

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dragon544
dragon544
6 months ago
Replied to dragon544

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And it doesn't need sails. It runs on engine. Though there is a gasoline poverty in this world, Ash made the engine run using heavy batteries filled with his energy. His ships have two super engines, and one engine needs two batteries. Two battery is strong enough to last atleast a month and he made Ten of them in advance.

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dragon544
dragon544
6 months ago
Commented

pick one

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And it doesn't need sails. It runs on engine. Though there is a gasoline poverty in this world, Ash made the engine run using heavy batteries filled with his energy. His ships have two super engines, and one engine needs two batteries. Two battery is strong enough to last atleast a month and he made Ten of them in advance.

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dragon544
dragon544
6 months ago
Replied to dragon544

I give every fanfiction a chance. i will wait 1 month otherwise if there are no chapters within that month i will drop that fanfiction and remove it from my library.i don't care if they post later if authors are willing to quit writing then come back i will have no trust of them continuing to write consistently in the future. they may just stop writing for another month or more. this was a very very good fanfiction of eragon it is sad to see it die and it is most likely to be the last good eragon fanfiction for a while.(Because most people don't know how to write fanfictions and just copy mtl's or have vary bad translations)