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2019-01-16 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Global
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AbAdDoN
AbAdDoN
3 days ago
Commented

author use ' ' for thoughts and " " for talking. otherwise it will be very confusing to read

"Sigh! Everything is a mess. And damm again this pain!"

Divergent King: Master of Myriad Anomaly

Divergent King: Master of Myriad Anomaly

Fantasy · sleepingpeacefully

AbAdDoN
AbAdDoN
16 days ago
Commented

green ? ... goblin ?

He was one who developed a rare taste in admiring the skies, the sunrise as his favorite amongst the rest. It was his daily routine, and one of the few things he found temporal peace of mind, in his grim and dark world. His roughed up and wrinkled olive skin, shimmered under the few rays of light brightening the sky of dawn.

Building My Guild With A Blank Scroll

Building My Guild With A Blank Scroll

Fantasy · KingRestorer

AbAdDoN
AbAdDoN
27 days ago
Replied to JMSnovel

Author you need to explain these things, like how they work, what are the leveling system, etc and not expect the readers to understand it magically without any hint and then you start abusing your own readers due to your own plot holes.

AbAdDoN
AbAdDoN
1 months ago
Commented

no issue, take proper rest and then upload the chapters

The main point is, if you don't see me posting, I'm not leaving—just taking a short break, no more than 24 hours from this moment.

Divinity Through Family Expansion

Divinity Through Family Expansion

Fantasy · TheZMan

AbAdDoN
AbAdDoN
1 months ago
Commented

this looks good, keep it this way

(Note: Changed the system window format. Is it better this way or should we go back to the old way. Let me know and I will redo the old ones too.)

Divinity Through Family Expansion

Divinity Through Family Expansion

Fantasy · TheZMan

AbAdDoN
AbAdDoN
1 months ago
Commented

Not funny 😒

"Sike." Cain said as he kicked the middle-aged man while controlling his strength as he didn't want to kill him accidentally, resulting in breaking a few of his bones.

SSS Ranked Transmigration: Taming Beauties and The Beasts!

SSS Ranked Transmigration: Taming Beauties and The Beasts!

Fantasy · Ash_Mira

AbAdDoN
AbAdDoN
1 months ago
Posted

Author it has been 300+ chapters and this MC is still in the dark about the reality(his parents being alive, there help, etc) whereas everyone near him is some bigshot and hiding the truth from him which makes it seem like a child who is thinking that he knows everything and the adults are enjoying seeing him like that and he has ZERO Achievement of his own till now (348 Chapters) as all the gifts, rewards, resources are being given by these bigshots. This is making it unbearable to read any longer due to the following reasons: Boring to read. No world development. No character development. No exciting plot, same one boring and easy to guess plot from chapter 1 to 348 as of now. Zero Achievement of Main Character. etc.

AbAdDoN
AbAdDoN
1 months ago
Replied to HaremNovelfan

so true. Author either improve this trash system or make it emotionless or this novel will be hard to read.

Relax, Host. Debt collectors in black suits won't be knocking on your door. The system will deduct this amount directly from your bank account.

Ultimate Spin System: Ero Spin?

Ultimate Spin System: Ero Spin?

Urban · Lil_Asmodeus

AbAdDoN
AbAdDoN
1 months ago
Commented

Author there is really no need to explain the movie if you are not aiming for the word count instead of the actual plot

After the boy lost the ability to walk, the girl couldn't forgive herself and after a few years, she committed suicide leaving the body heart broken.

Harem King: Getting All The Ladies I Wanted!

Harem King: Getting All The Ladies I Wanted!

Urban · AndyZero

AbAdDoN
AbAdDoN
2 months ago
Commented

from the start of the quest, all his actions are idiotic, any sane person can tell this much. too much of the forced plot