so Qiao Kou
Qiao Wei was brainless, arrogant and impulsive. More importantly, she looked down at her and ordered her around as if she were her maid. So, Qiao Wei did not have the heart to stay loyal towards her.
Springtime Farming: A Happy Wife At Home
General · Yiyi Lanxi
The overall story is acceptable, but the jumping from one character scenario to the other is unstable. The background elements with the system/systems will need more development
their niece was not an ingrate
No one wanted to work hard. And their niece was an ingrate who didn't know what was good for her.
I Transmigrated Into A Divorce And Remarried A Hunter Husband
General · Good
to live in ( peace)
"Sun Yiming, I've had enough of the past. In those days, I didn't understand anything. But after I beat you yesterday, I realized I can never compromise with you. You would never feel bad for what you did, nor could I bring you to stand on your own two feet. So I decided to return an eye for an eye and a tooth for a tooth. You beat me up, so I beat you back. And if you dare to scold me, I'll smash your face and tear your mouth off. If you don't leave the four of us alone to live in pace, I'll kill you!"
I Transmigrated Into A Divorce And Remarried A Hunter Husband
General · Good
with one hand holding up her (waist)
Han Qiao was growing tired. With one hand she was holding up her waste and with the other she was gripping the club. However, she soon glimpsed a shadow dancing across the courtyard wall. Shining dully, its eyes were like wild beasts.
I Transmigrated Into A Divorce And Remarried A Hunter Husband
General · Good
the gender in this paragraph for Sun Yi is wrong, it should be her
"Mother, let me help." Sun Yi stepped up as though he knew what Han Qiao was about to do. Still, his tone was very serious.
I Transmigrated Into A Divorce And Remarried A Hunter Husband
General · Good
Ms. Han had already gone (ahead)with procedures
"The famous food blogger, philanthropist, explorer, and successor of the XX Fist, Ms. Han Qiao, passed away in the capital at three o'clock this morning. Before she died, Ms. Han had already gone head with procedures to donate her body and inheritance. In life, Ms. Han was..."
I Transmigrated Into A Divorce And Remarried A Hunter Husband
General · Good
stopped midway (due) to the pain in her stomach
"Don't blame her. She's still a child!" Li Hong wanted to reach out to stop him, but her hand stopped midway dye to the pain in her stomach. Wang Wang's heart ached when he saw this.
The Three-and-a-Half Years Old Baby is Pampered by Eight Uncles!
Urban · Mountain Springs
the author needs to pay attention to Jinghan and Huaxin names, they are often mixed up as it has been constantly stated in the last few chapters that Jinghan is the one getting married
Farming Beneath the Changbai Mountains
General · Changbai Mountain snow