bro straight up died 💀
Then, like the final scene of a play, an explosion occurred, destroying not only Xiangju's soul realm but his entire body as well.
Anime & Comics · Rogoba
Thank you for being so receptive to my feedback :D
can you just put quotation marks when a character is speaking? It's difficult to tell when they're speaking because you sometimes do -this- to indicate it and -this. to indicate it. Just do "this" for speech and 'this' for thoughts. It makes it so much easier.
NONONOOONONNNOONO PLEASE KEEP IT AS GOKUXCHICHI AND 18XKRILLIN PLEEEEEASE NO MULTI FOR ONCE
harem and lemons is terrible
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Anime & Comics · Silverfang
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"That's what you're doing it for, isn't it?" Gohan asked smiling before walking out of that room. Cheeli just puffed out her cheeks in annoyance.
Anime & Comics · LordPhenex026
If we're a year into what would have been the three years timeskip, shouldn't Gohan be 8? Because I think I remember him being 11 when he fights Cell (unless I am mistaken). My thinking is that he is 7 when trunks arrives, then add 3 years, plus the one year in the time chamber. Again, perhaps I'm not remembering it correctly.
From what I could tell, Gohan and Trunks still hadn't noticed that I had arrived. They both were leaps and bounds ahead of what they were last year. Trunks had gotten so powerful that I was certain that he could take on the androids of his time without a problem while the now 7-year-old Gohan had somehow managed to keep at his pace.
Anime & Comics · Hrblackwater
Yo author, I think it'd actually be pretty nice if you gave Monoma a younger brother, that's not normally done nowadays. It'd be a change of pace, yeah?
Shibasaki wasn't about to listen, and she really was open to the idea of giving Neito a sibling.
Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
Is bulma really a person that would allow that though? fr
Opening her eyes wide Bulma found Raditz's face moving away, but the sensation was still fresh on her lips.
Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
Oh btw, about the title of the story - It's "Reborn", not "Reborned"
Tales of Demons and Gods - Reborn as Zhu Xiangju
Anime & Comics · Rogoba