i think this arc is a little to long more than 15 chapter even though it can be finished in 5 or 7 chapter maybe less and you should stop write the movie if your going to write people monolog the movie, so it doesn't feel repetitive
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i don't know what to say accept thank you for the adventure
will you make a side strory of hasirama, madara and shifu?
try using AI to fix the grammars/sentence so it will be easier to read, or use software like grammarly because the story are great
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you should wait until you have 40 chap or so and have no reason to drop it, because the 40 chap is a good indicator for readers that you won't drop the novel without telling them.
are you dropping this author? because there's haven't been an update for weeks ☹
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The Game Creator in Marvel(News)
Movies · Unholy_Angel
i think im going to stop reading this, i read up to chapter 35. when the mc killed the maid that was it for me because it doesn't make sense, killing the maid would make people ask questions because now you have a missing person.
The Eminence of a True Monarch of the Shadows
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3