Dragonia_101

Dragonia_101

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Dragonia_101
Dragonia_101
1 months ago
Commented

Enjoying it

It's been a while since I last asked for your opinion on the book. Are you still enjoying it so far? Is the quality of the writing still good? Are there any grammar mistakes or issues that are affecting your reading experience?

Teyvat : Ascendancy of the Heavenly Principle

Teyvat : Ascendancy of the Heavenly Principle

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Dragonia_101
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Dragonia_101
Dragonia_101
3 months ago
Commented

thanks for the translation

Dragonia_101
Dragonia_101
4 months ago
Posted

it's is quite good. for updates, it is steady writing quality is excellent character design is quite good and you can feel how aura's character changes over time even if she her self doesn't realize it, the way author has shown her emotions and developed it is quite excellent. story and world development is excellent. World is explained in such a way that it's not hard for just anyone to get into the story without even knowing frieren. story is also developed step by step.

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Dragonia_101
Dragonia_101
4 months ago
Posted

Nothing about the World background or any details about the world is explained clearly Story is illogical and Main character and his family members are spineless fools who despite having the power to overwehlm the kingdom,but does nothing. Mc father forces mcs lover into slavehood cause his wife said so. MC having the power and influence free her without any problem, did nothing but instead says that he will earn money to get her.

Dragonia_101
Dragonia_101
4 months ago
Posted

Enjoying reading it. ......................................................................................................................................

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