epic rap battles of history
Another curious thing was his full name in this new life, which was as follows: Luke Poe. The same surname as the famous writer and literary master of horror: Edgar Allan Poe.
TV · Nathe07
This story is so incredibly boring I can't think of any advice to give you. I will, however, try and point out what may be so bad about it. Fist off, the main character himself. After reading this far, there is nothing positive about him that stands out to me as a reader. He himself has shown to be a boring character. Second, the dialogue. None of the dialogue actually is valuable or holds substance. It makes the characters all look more one dimensional than they already are. Third, lack of risk. There is conflict in the story, but it is poorly executed each time. There is 0 tension, and everything just reads like I could skim through and miss nothing. Lastly few observations, there is a severe lack of world building, the main characteris unintesting and the story makes no effort to make readers interestedin him, characters are all uninteresting and I don't care about them, plot is elusive and I don't even know the story's general direction, and the chapters are too short for the amount of filler they have. I HIGLY recommend trying to compare your story to high quality ones or popular novels. Shadow Slave is a perfect novel to do this with, and everyone should study that masterpiece. My advice may not be what you need anyway so take it with a grain of salt. Good luck in your future endeavors.
"Women? They'll only slow the speed I draw my sword!"
Women, they'll just slow down my typing speed.
Urban · Cabbage, cabbage, ah
An original character
"Asuka, you're brilliant!" Chika exclaimed, eyes sparkling. "No wonder your mom's a world-famous designer!"
Anime & Comics · SlothMonarch
[Players "The Evil of This World," "Cancer of the Earth," and "Cat Girl Kaguya" have cleared all stages, achieving the game's best record. Multiple scenes are now broken, key characters are missing, and numerous vengeful students require counseling.]
Anime & Comics · SlothMonarch
That woman was loud. No matter what she was doing or where she was doing it, she would make it loud. I wonder if that's the reason she and her husband bought a house on the outskirts of the village… you know, to avoid disturbing the neighbors during their marital activities.
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
Nah, bro thought he was slick posting this
"Very good, very good." Shuzo Otaki was very happy to hear that, "It's good to be eighteen, very good."
Anime & Comics · SkyRokket
Itachi looked up from his bowl, his eyes meeting mine with a soft smile. He seemed thoughtful for a moment before he spoke, his voice calm yet certain. "Yes, I think so...a sister would be nice."
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
There are comparisons that can be drawn, but at the end of the day, there are no connections between the two verses.
Protagonist Name: Takeshi Arata
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
He's pointing out how it is easier to cancel people who are 1. Straight, 2. White, or 3. Men. Hope this helps.
This could also be one of the reasons why he became a target for bullies since he had excellent grades compared to them. In addition to his attractiveness, he was the envy of everyone (or so he and his narcissism thought).
Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
TV · Nathe07