Curious_caravan

Let me sum up in short. The story is good but the execution is bad. It is fast paced to the point it feels rushed after the gravel world ark. The end is even more rushed and illogical. The character are well made but the world background lacks depth. There is nice and interesting evolutions at start but again only few lines are used to evolve them after the gravel world ark. The logic is lacking quite a lot. There are many system holders of even higher ranks yet his second rate system can surpass them all. System holders that has lived for millions of years can't beat him who has live for 2 decades.And many more of such incidents The only good thing is that unlike many other monster genre books, this book sticks with the concept of monster till the end.

I loved your previous work and this looks good as well. I just hope in the process of generating ideas you do not devalue the wow factor of book 1. I just don't wish to see a repeat of what happened with naruto after release of boruto.

This is a very interesting novel with a nice concept. I read it after I saw one novel with a "shop based" theme to have so many chapters after finding the world's and beyond. And it did not disappoint me...at start Atleast. Though after the store was transferred to another planet, it deviated from its theme of a store and turned into a cultivation novel. Instead of focusing on pets it only focused on their master and pet use just cast aside as some add onns That was truly a let down.