We are all stars, but that doesn’t mean our lights won’t shine.
2018-12-16 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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Hoshiandme
4 years ago
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Good writing. Interesting characters and the prologue was nice. Your thoughts regarding dreams jn the beginning Kept me interested. They go in line to my own thoughts too, So it quite intrigued me a bit. Enough to continue looking into the book.
(Disclaimer: I am not a professional writer. But I do love writing and this story. So I will try my best! And this is BL! You have been warned! 15+ in the beginning. Turns 18+ later
And the image was not made by me or for me!)
Atlas was always alone. He grew up alone. And died alone.
But that did not mean he wanted to be alone. He dreamed as everyone did, dreamed of making friends, having friends, and living a very good life.
But the dreams failed.
But Atlas never stopped trying.
He tried and he tried, but with each consecutive failure. He closed off his heart altogether.
The heart once closed and cold, can never be hurt.
But even with his heart turning to ice, he still dreamed of someone being there for him.
But, when you cannot find it, when given the chance.
Would you make it yourself?
Atlas was given a chance.
And so, instead of finding out a friend, he made one himself.
Good writing. Interesting characters and the prologue was nice. Your thoughts regarding dreams jn the beginning Kept me interested. They go in line to my own thoughts too, So it quite intrigued me a bit. Enough to continue looking into the book.
Dream turns into Reality
Fantasy · amber0613