he is a coward
POINT 1: Aemon is INDEPENDENT. He is no one's puppet. He's not Daemon's, Viserys's, Rhaenyra's, his mother's, Jeyne Arryn's, or even mine. He is independent and will always act in his own best interest.
TV · Ghostrider0002
coward MC
"You are greatly exaggerating the situation. Remember that we are here for ten, maybe twenty days and then back home. It is extremely important to show the rest of the nobility of the Vale and even the kingdom that House Royce is doing well and that you are strong; it will keep the vultures seeking blood at bay," she said, this time seriously.
TV · Ghostrider0002
why not MC aged ..... he always 17 years old ... time pass but he still 16/17 ...
After so many days .... u write this chapter ...!!!
too much stretching on same kind of topics.... last 4/5 chapter are kind of same .... Sorry but I have to say because I like the concept of your fanfic....
it 300 thousands not 30 thousands .... author making same mistake again and again 😔😔
no
I am starting to hate the MC ...... I don't know why
Use single name for every single character ... it is confusing to identify the character.
"Yes, sweetie!" Sarah answered absentmindedly, her mind racing as she sat down and forced a smile at the young man, "Of course! How are you and your friends holding up?"
Fantasy · One_Winged_Angel
Every Chapter has too much Description 😕
Lord of the Sky City
Fantasy · Rookie Detective