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Interesting ending even through it was logical considering he was stronger than everyone else. Bit it ist not very satisfying in regards To Hancock, Yamamoto and Bellamy. Don't misunderstand. I don't a romatic development but something which can provide closure. Otherweise thank you for the story. It was a very enjoyable story for me.

Could it be that mixed up the order of chapters? This chapter reads as if he has got past the Dementors while in the last chapter he still worked on the Patronus.

Thanks for the chapter You don't really write how Leylin uses the 'sentient force' he gathers. The most logical for a Magus would be to use it on his ''Magic''. But I rather like the thought that his physical Stats (Vitality, Agility, Strength) also grow with. Especially since he can easily do this with his sentient force.

Why do you only want to strengthen the body, soul, and mind? Why not strengthen magic as well? He will after all go to different worlds. Therefore he should be as powerful as possible.

Welcome back and great chapter. It opens a facet of the magic. That is one of the things which I truly enjoy on your history I wish you stay in good health

As an idea for a for a new Quirk: You can convert sun light or another type of energy in life force. That way you could recharge faster your life force and you can also make stronger quirk "cheaper" by building in that it uses life force as fuel

Great chapter P.S. Dont forget about the skill " Physical Endurance "

I like Bella how she is. She fits the Bella of the books really well

Why did you not exclude Dumbledore from your Potter Family Vault? He can continue to take his Gold.

Thanks for the chapter.

It was explained that Gringotts just safeguards the vaults. Healers are not provided by Gringotts.