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2018-12-03 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Philippines
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WiseStratos
WiseStratos
1 years ago
Replied to Zoaper

Oh yeah that, I kinda noticed that I have had a hard time writing about emotions or character of each person in the fanfic, which was one of the reasons I listed on this particular chapter that’s making me hold up on updating frequently, found in the Authors Note. Although you do have to note that most characters in these anime verse are not necessarily… the most sane characters, not even the ones from Grisaia, so I just thought it matches to Ryoba Aishi in the game you know. Heck in Grisaia, the game or novel it was even noted that Yuuji had intercourse with his mother at a young tender age that sort of had an influence on Kazuki to do something similar. But oh well, you do you I guess. Btw this is the place I got the example for Grisaia involving Yuuji and her mother which is also noted in the Wiki fandom.

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WiseStratos
1 years ago
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Well… It’s true that a 2 year old killing someone is a bit over the top, but I kinda had a few consideration on his… I guess past before reincarnation which accounts for why he felt normal killing someone, being so apathetic, as well as charm that reaches out to all ages. Not to mention, the reasons behind the system. That’s all I could tell you to be honest other than everything will build up to my thought out plot in the future maybe after many many unknown chapter. And as for this particular chapter, it’s not necessarily getting a women not of his age, rather that his sense of presence or “aura” gives a comforting feeling that she can’t help but want to get closer, so it hasn’t reach the level of love, but just something that helps Yūna and him easily establish a sort of connection or relationship of some sort akin to friendship. As for the matter of being a lover, well who knows~~ Anyways it’s another build up to a future plot development. I do kind of agree that the previous before rewrite had some advantages, but I started having many writers block as well as plot holes that goes against Hiroto’s past in my mind, so I dropped that development. In addition to being quite inexperienced that time where I couldn’t capture everyone’s character well, including Hiroto, messing everything up which was another reason for the rewrite. That’s kinda all the hints I could give you, before it turns into an absolute spoiler.

WiseStratos
WiseStratos
1 years ago
Commented

Just for a reference of what the man that Yūna bumped into looked like in the manga of Happy Sugar Life!:

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WiseStratos
1 years ago
Commented

Here’s another one for this specific chapter.

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"Ah! I forgot to tell you my name." The girl noticed she didn't know the name of the cute kid in front of her, introduced herself. "Kobe! My name is Yūna Kobe. What's your name?"

Reborn in the World of Grisaia? Is There A Reason Behind My Existence?

Reborn in the World of Grisaia? Is There A Reason Behind My Existence?

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WiseStratos
1 years ago
Commented

Yūna Kobe:

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"Ah! I forgot to tell you my name." The girl noticed she didn't know the name of the cute kid in front of her, introduced herself. "Kobe! My name is Yūna Kobe. What's your name?"

Reborn in the World of Grisaia? Is There A Reason Behind My Existence?

Reborn in the World of Grisaia? Is There A Reason Behind My Existence?

Anime & Comics · WiseStratos

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  • Reborn in the World of Grisaia? Is There A Reason Behind My Existence? original

    Reborn in the World of Grisaia? Is There A Reason Behind My Existence?

    Anime & Comics ADVENTURE R18 HAREM MYSTERY DARK ANIME CONQUER SUPERNATURAL EGOIST ECCHI

    Amidst a dark void lies an unknown soul who with undetermined origin and past reincarnates to the works of fiction. Anime, Manga, Hentai, and all other verses that never existed came to fruition. As he comes to adapt to his living conditions and gains an unknown power in his journey. He is now known as Hiroto Kazami. And upon reincarnation, finds out he was reborn as the younger-brother of Kazuki replacing Yuuji in the world of Grisaia. But is it truly the only world? Over time, mysterious phenomenons appear out of nowhere, beings or events that have unknown origin and undetermined motives behind their actions that threatens the safety and future of the world he come across. Follow him on his journey as he unearths the mysteries within his circumstances and what lied beyond his past that had its own series of secrets that led to his entire ordeal. First World (In Progress) : —Grisaia no Meikyuu. —Yandere Simulator. —Otome Dori! —Classroom of the Elites —Happy Sugar Life! ————————————————————— (***Author’s Note*** I am still new to writing, so I am trying to get adjusted to writing a story meaning everything is still in progress and undergoing improvements as I improved in this journey. Feel free to leave a note for any problems. Another heads up, I do not own any anime, art, or character aside from the OC protagonist mentioned in this novel. It is merely a fanfiction trying to develop my writing skill. At times the cover may be an AI generated picture or one that was picked off the internet. I will try to include both, one original and one generated, so as to give the readers an image to go off on, in various styles. And considering this is a fanfic there are a lot of spoilers, so those that want to get spoiled, it is your choice to read. Additionally, the update schedule for new chapters is inconsistent which can come in days, a few weeks, and possibly rarely months. Lastly, the pacing is slow for a various reasons, as it gives me more ways to develop the story and build a decent foundation to all later future chapters. Not to mention, being too fast-paced gives off the vibes of being rushed. )

    27 Chs 733 คอลเลกชัน

  • -The Return Of Zero- original

    -The Return Of Zero-

    Fantasy ACTION DARK CULTIVATION OVERPOWERED VILLAIN GENIUS ANTIHERO CONQUER SUPERNATURAL INVINCIBLE

    It was year 20XX. The very day that the world ended. As the world that humanity spent thousands to millions of years to develop sooner fell to ruins. For there were invaders, aliens, otherworldly figures that broke the law and order that existed in modern times. And came intruding with enormous and unimaginable powers that truly broke the norms that existed. As nuclear powerhouses were of no threat to these invaders. As it lead to the collapse of society of the entire Human race, unable to retaliate or bring about peace once more. And with no form of power or use that the invaders find attractive aside from the very limited resources that existed. Humanity was forced to slavery, where a multitude of atrocities were committed without regard to morality or ethics. Later on abandoned by the very beings whom left Earth in great disarray and the brink of total utter destruction of the planet itself. However, at the moment they departed infected a few remaining humans that introduced the second catastrophe for those who survived. One of the few that lived is an orphan who recently graduated high school and sought for a normal peaceful life. A wish that was not granted as the 16 Year Old Boy faced the invasion, the end of human civilization. A child with incomparable talent who chose to remain in hiding by conforming to societal standards for the sake of his own form of peace. Something even before the catastrophic event was not attained, as if everything was against him. His name was Zero.

    4 Chs 9 คอลเลกชัน