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all i can say about this martial peak fanfic is that where is the (what if) or big changes scenario in this. Fanfic are supposed to be like that but this is totally a new novel at this point there is no intervention in the story that some of us reader know because some of us stop reading the original novel when yang kai reach (origin king) or in the (dao source) and above cultivation.So my question is any plans on making a knew one because your novel right now is really not popular at this point. Maybe try starting with the fanfic OC MC being brother of Yang kai or someone with an ancient family hidden to everyone and he interact with some original characters in martial peak and have some of his own opportunity to get his own inheritance or steal some of yang kai cultivation and treasures opportunity with hardwork. And for his future companions some OC heroine for OC MC and maybe some from the store that is being forgotten to join OC MC harem. By the way this is just my opinion on your fanfic don't be offended just giving you my feedback and im not really good in English so sorry if some word in my comment doesn't make sense.

the idea are good but the why did you make the mc 27 in his pass life if he is so dumb seriously you should have made him 15-17 he has known games and story in novel. Yet he didn't think of creating talent for cooking or some researcher skill to know the ingredients that use in the foods. im not telling that this novel is trash or something just giving you idea that make it with less plot holes because its confusing to me who has read novels that its within logic of idea and yours is in the line of below average but still good, so keep up and improve your novel ether when you make new one or continue this.👍