Yeah, that's what I was thinking too. If she found out that she was being seemingly deceived by Zen, then who's to say she isn't being deceived again by those who told her about the Pills thing?
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Magic of Zombie Cultivator
แฟนตาซี · ViciousThing
I was gonna say this on Discord, but I can't dm you now, but anyway: I've only read up to chapter 2, my bad xd don't worry, I'll give my review once I've read enough chapters.
Dang, a very angry stepfather. It seems the stepmother is kindhearted though.
Short and eventful chapter. I don't even what the queen was thinking. Actually, why would the king marry someone like her xd
Thank you for reading and reviewing, I agree there are improvements to be made! And they will be coming... when I have free time xd I put a lot of stuff in the foreshadowing and symbolism, so if you have any theories, feel free to share them!
I like the cosmic lore. I like it when someone nerds out to the point that they created whole worlds, systems, and religions. It feels nice reading something with that much effort. In the first chapter, we get a helpful serving of our protagonist's personality xd and damn he's emo and depressing. But we get to see why. We also see the setting, the protag's situation, and the people around him. Most things that were described had purpose, to illustrate what the protag feels and how he reacts to memories. That's great, because sometimes, authors describe so much about something without actually saying anything. Interested to see how this story unfolds.
Oh, welp. There's the foreshadowing's punchline xd
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Eternal Me
แฟนตาซี · diwiz
Whooo. Didn't "The Amazing Spiderman'd" this.
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Eternal Me
แฟนตาซี · diwiz
Suzuki? Car? So... this a mix of fantasy and reality? xd
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Eternal Me
แฟนตาซี · diwiz
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original Kairo: Revenge of the Last Survivor
*Currently editing 46-49 (March 16, 2026) Kairo Whether is an unremarkable 10-year-old boy hailing from an isolated, rural village deep within the forest. He wakes up on a seemingly typical day, venturing out to the forest on a chore with his friends. He expects his life to remain relatively peaceful and uneventful. Though he shortly learns that life has a sick sense of humor as he returns to witness his village under fire. Fueled by hatred, he swore vengeance on the mysterious assailants. On his way to a kingdom to look for answers, he finds an unlikely encounter that would turn the wheels of fate. This is a tale of life and death, fantastical powers and action, perseverance and doubts, and a journey tightly pertinent to the world's demise. ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ • ~ Main genre: Tragedy Sub-genres: Fantasy, Drama, Romance, Action, Magic Unscheduled chapters Book cover made by myself (4/18/23) Synopsis update: 1/14/2547 Chs 18 คอลเลกชัน
I was expecting more of a vengeful perspective, as written in the synopsis. But this is fine as well! Maybe he'll have his vengeful thoughts later on?
Magic of Zombie Cultivator
แฟนตาซี · ViciousThing