food and stuff? That's where I got these gloves!
Theory of Combat Magic: A; Principles of Advanced Magic: A; Forgemastering: A; Healing: S-. School points gained from daily evaluation: 3,365.
Fantasy · Legion20
wait, you don't choose your element right? Or else everyone would be a light mage, so that mean you have roughly 1/6 chances to get insta killed the moment you awaken just out of bad luck? What kind of shit story building is that?
The ones who awakened the Element of Darkness were said to be the ones selected by the Devil himself to bring ruin to the world. They were hated all over the world. The Churches of Elements joined hands to destroy the Church of Dark Magic centuries ago, and since then, the Dark Magicians were hunted openly whenever one was discovered.
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
So, if this is not the symbol of the dark element, and dual element mages don't exist, maybe your first hypothesis shouldn't be that it's the darkness element. Sure it's right because the author said so, but if maya were to cut the back of her right had without noticing, and found out later the red shape that appeared out of nowhere, I doubt her first idea would be "holy shit I'm a water fire mage"
He observed his left hand. His old Symbol of the Holy Element of Light was still there. "Impossible! Two elements? Light and Darkness? This doesn't make sense. Light and Darkness are even more conflicting than water and fire! Moreover, no one has two Elements, as far as I know! So how is this possible?"
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
so, the disciple of the head priest got no protection at his weakest? It really is painfully stupid, someone like the head priest probably has enemies, head of competing or oposing groups are the firsts that come to mind (the group of dark mages would probably want the most talented light mage to die an early death, and if there is a royal family or something like that, a governement that does not depends on mages for thei authority, they'd probably also want him dead just to prevent the church from growing it's influence further), but inside enemies, priest that competed with him for the spot of head priest, and internal group with different philosophies could also want him dead just to undermine the authority of the head priest. To reach such a high position, the head priest is probably a smart man, he would have thought of that, so it is mind boggling that no steps were taken to prenvent the mc's death
"Well, you're right. This is certainly a crime, and if the Head Priest of Church of Light finds out, we would be killed for attempting to kill his precious disciple." Hawrin agreed. He gazed at his older brother. "He's right. Let's leave him, brother. We should stop. I'm really scared now."
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
isn't this what minor antagonist without much brains say when they are about to get killed?
Gabriel stood up, trying to convince the others to let him leave. "I promise I won't tell anyone if you let me leave. No one will know what happened here. We still have time to correct the mistakes!"
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
yeah this kind of character fives a good idea of what to expect from the novel, take your brains off everyone, we won't be needing these anymore! On a serious note, please make your antagonists make sense, suspension of incredulity only works is the world the author exposes is believable within it's ruleset, and dumb shit like that is not. Their plan and how they executed it make no sense, how did they hide on a roof, what do they expect from killing a member of one of the most influential organisations in the world, how come no protection was given to the youth that was supposed to be the most talented light mage to ever exist. Nothing makes sense and it's painful to read, novel were never carfully crafted masterpieces, but they still had some self respect at some point, now new novels feel like fast food reading, produced as fast as possible and with duch little quality that it is hard to actually read through it.
"What am I doing here?" Javin asked, cackling. "I came back to the town because I was told that my little brother was going to be selected in Holy Church of Light, but you took that opportunity from him. You think you can live after stealing something from my brother?"
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
you're telling me one of the largest organisation of the world sent a high ranking officier to recruit a talented new sprout, and they didn't rhink people would turn jealous? I mean, a bodyguard or two wouldn't have been much for them right?
"You won't screw up tomorrow. Because your tomorrow will never come...." Came a cold voice from the back, stunning Gabriel. Before Gabriel could turn to see who had spoken, something hard smacked the back of his skull.
Fantasy · Demonic_angel
Come one dude, the guards? Can we have any story with normal sane background characters?
Afterwards the two noticed Lara, who Even though she was young, her body was already shaped like an adult woman's, with all the right curves. So the two guards checked out her body, in which they didn't hide the lust in their eyes. Since no one passes through the gates at this hour, the two guards thought that they could have a little fun with the young lady. When Ren saw the looks they were giving Lara, his killing intent was bursting out and had encroached the two guards.
Fantasy · lynerparel
from this point onward, I will read the uncapitalised demon as "devil"
Divine, Buddha, Immortal, Human, demon, Demon, Ghost, Monster—creatures of the same category can ascend without side effects if conditions are met. Different but similar categories might also ascend at some cost, for example, from Human to Divine, or demon to Demon.
Eastern · Holding Rain
wouldn't that have the opposite outcome tho? Like, they are so over trained that they become more dangerous, and the sheer amount of training is exhausting so they'd want to escape more
"Don't worry. We'll put them through even stricter training to ensure they don't have time for such thoughts."
The Regressed Mercenary’s Machinations
Fantasy · babayaga01