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Although I really really liked this story but the grammer is really pushing me away from reading it further. I am sorry dear author but I will quit here for now and come back later if the book gets edited. It will really be one of the best storyline if grammer is improvised. Keep up the good work.

Oh really? Which one is it?

Seems like a new couple alert... Yang Yutang Sis and Xie Yufan...

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You are doing awesome. Story line is good. But yeah a lot of grammatical mistakes. Let me know if you need editor to remove grammer mistakes. I won't be editing on huge scale just can help you with small grammar mistakes as I have time constraints as well so I am willing to do it at free cost as long as I get to read book at free cost. Note : I am passionate reader and author myself.😁👍

There are always ppl criticising you and your work. I faced same issues with my second novel. But I just said one thing : my theme is contemporary romance. To gather inspiration I read. I read a lot. And when you read a lot, some things create a image in your mind which later on may develop as a outline of your story. It's very natural to write something similar to what you read or get inspired from and is followed by worldwide authors. And ofcourse all romances are same yet different with their own twists so similarity is mere a coincidence. So don't pay attention to such comments. You are doing amazing work

Awww. I think the grammar is perfect in initial chapters as well. We all have minute mistakes so you should really be proud that your work is amazing. I will definitely try other novel of yours once I catch up with this one. It's is very well written with perfect plot line up. Keep up the good work. Kudos.

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Tbh I am loving this story a lot. The plot is completely different and most importantly there is this sweetness and affection in all relationships. No wickedness at all as of now. No shrewd in laws or scum bf or sluty bestfriend. Overall very nice and positive vibes while reading this story. Hope it stays like this in coming chapters as well. Wonderful work Author. Being a author myself I know how much efforts we need to put it. I gave up in mid due to other priorities but looking forward to read this story getting unfold. Lots of love 💕 and wishes for success.