It has summoning!? Thanks for saying that and saving me from wasting all that time.
The translation is decent, and the concept is intriguing. That's all I can and will say. but for the sake of the review I'll add on that i like the Tenseigan.
It's not automatically there. You have to click to add an author's note. There are quick pre-written choices though, and in this case, this is the one the translator chose. which is what I'm criticising. From what I can tell, it's even an edited version of the pre-written choice. As the pre-written one has one more sentence where it tells you to "VOTE for me".
What are you talking about? I've published shit on here. You write the author's thoughts yourself (author's thoughts is that last bit at the end).
Canon did not start in the year 60 after konoha's creation. from what I can tell, Naruto was born in approx. year 65, so Canon starts in year 78. If you want to read where i get lost of my numbers then Google naruto timeline and it'll likely be the top link. also where did you get the idea from that i said anything about 1st, 2nd, and 3rd war being within 12 years? are you imagining what I wrote? The third ninja war ends like 30 years after the first one began.
It's still the 38th year of Konoha. With the village having emerged victorious from the Second Ninja World War, it is now nursing its wounds and quietly gathering strength. The medical system is at the forefront of efforts to boost investment, but it's just the beginning, and progress has been slow.
Anime & Comics · NoviceAuthor
I didn't like them, but that's because I'm a filthy casual when it comes to games.
[Naruto World selected! Congratulations on your first-world choice. You have been awarded three random loot boxes tailored to the level of the Naruto World. Preparing distribution…]
Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday
but then the other worlds would have this exact problem instead. no matter how you twist it, it makes a large portion of the story completely pointless and basically just a dream. This is a MAJOR red flag for me. if you like it then you may keep reading. I probably won't. I dropped it completely very soon after this.
[Naruto World selected! Congratulations on your first-world choice. You have been awarded three random loot boxes tailored to the level of the Naruto World. Preparing distribution…]
Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday
Who cares what a T-rex can do to a giant? A wizard can slice through a T-rex in a second. Magic is just SO far above that it's ridiculous. This is such a stupid argument.
"For my third wish," I began, "I want a mythical creature as my Animagus form. Something that reflects my strength and ferocity."
Book&Literature · LoneManic
Yeah, and if you want to show off, sure. But if we're thinking practical in any way shape or form, then no.
"For my third wish," I began, "I want a mythical creature as my Animagus form. Something that reflects my strength and ferocity."
Book&Literature · LoneManic
Word count chapter means an automatic 1* for me. Maybe if I actually read it at some point this might go up. Do better.
Pokemon: A Gym Leader's Rise(SI)
Anime & Comics · MrMime24