Dragon5162

1 days ago

Commented

To make the reading easier conversations should have " before and after someone talks.

As I was saying the goddess said I would like to give you the choice of being Reincarnated differently from other people usually people and reincarnate into the same world without their memories from their past life but for you I would like to reincarnate you with your memories and be able to live in a different world. As Lucy heard those words, she felt excitement, But She had a couple of questions she would like to ask umm goddess Would I be able to choose the world I go to, and what type of powers I will be able to have in that world be able to have in That world. To her disappointment, the goddess shook her head and said she would not be able to choose. The goddess explained that this would be a little bit different pretty much it would all be up to luck There would be a wheel, and it would spin through different planets and universes, And wherever the wheel stopped. is where she would reincarnate. And for the powers, it would be pretty much the same thing.

Reborn in my hero academia with lightning and water manipulation

Anime & Comics · heavenly_Frost

Dragon5162

1 days ago

Commented

Zerg? That doesnt sound like something he should say to the media.

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Marvel : Zerg Overlord

Movies · Hey_you_there

Dragon5162

5 days ago

Commented

You should use [system] or something similar to make the system ai talking stand out. Without something like that its difficult to read and/or tell when its the system ai talking.

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Pokemon: Flames of Rebirth

Anime & Comics · Vivid_Horizons

Dragon5162

19 days ago

Commented

I personally like this the most especially because I'm always a fan of taming/raising creatures/plants

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MCU: as an alchemist

Movies · Bulale_Abali

Dragon5162

21 days ago

Commented

From my knowledge it's illegal to put fanfiction behind a paywall. Something about making money from a copyrighted work. So having to purchase the fanfiction would be illegal i believe. I don't know all the specifics however.

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