jdog216

male LV 14

I like reading

2018-09-17 เข้าร่วมแล้ว United States
ป้าย 11

Moments 23
jdog216
jdog216
1 years ago
Replied to daygon_yuuki

So the real story starts after it goes premium? Yea ok.

jdog216
jdog216
1 years ago
Posted

The writing is fine. But I didn't start reading this story expecting a tragedy. If you want to write a tragedy that's fine, but mark it as such.

jdog216
jdog216
1 years ago
Commented

He doesn't know how to cry! Really? OK

jdog216
jdog216
2 years ago
Commented

Can't afford to kick them out, but no problem letting them die? makes all the sense in the world.

They couldn't really afford to kick them out just for these small offences even the rules were strict, since their academy already had very few disciples compared to other academies.

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Fantasy · Blizzard54k

jdog216
jdog216
2 years ago
Replied to Daoist1WuR6Z

Like 5 lines ago the author wrote every child born after first light has superpowers.

Right now it's 2795 or rather 773 A.F.L (After First Light) and according to the government's survey data, 4 out of 10 people possess superpowers.

Villain's Rising

Villain's Rising

Urban · Night_Crawler619

jdog216
jdog216
2 years ago
Posted

Subpar writing, it amazes me how many 5 stars this story has. The story has no character development just some overpowered entitled MC's with the emotional range of a 3yrs.

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jdog216
jdog216
2 years ago
Replied to The_handsome_fatty

Running off with another dude she has a crush on while having a husband is hoe behavior.

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The Supreme Satanic System

The Supreme Satanic System

Fantasy · The_handsome_fatty

jdog216
jdog216
2 years ago
Replied to romeotango148

something wrong with you.

jdog216
jdog216
3 years ago
Commented

lol

As I gaze at the bottom of the body I see a roughly 20 inch long dick, and if I was frozen before, I'm stone now.

Adventures of 'Another' Isekai Protagonist

Adventures of 'Another' Isekai Protagonist

Fantasy · ProjektBlue

jdog216
jdog216
3 years ago
Commented

I'm going to be super disappointed if Minos ever forgives and reconciles with his mother. She is a horrible woman.